Life Ranching
Ranching is a cyclic business50 total reviews
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This flowed really well and I particularly liked the rhyme in your writing. I thought the picture you chose worked really well with the piece as well. An enjoyable piece of writing. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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This flowed really well and I particularly liked the rhyme in your writing. I thought the picture you chose worked really well with the piece as well. An enjoyable piece of writing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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jacob, thanks!
Comment from Boogienights
Sounds like a lot of work! This is a great contest entry, done very well. I've often wondered why people on ranches and farms, who work so hard, do it. Is it worth all the work? Thank God they do though. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Sounds like a lot of work! This is a great contest entry, done very well. I've often wondered why people on ranches and farms, who work so hard, do it. Is it worth all the work? Thank God they do though. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Boogie nights thank you
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Great poem my friend i have horses,, feeding feeding riding riding would not change it for a thing wish i had a six for you
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Great poem my friend i have horses,, feeding feeding riding riding would not change it for a thing wish i had a six for you
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Ogden
It's not easy to write a tyburn poem that follows the rules and also seems to make sense. I don't know much about ranching, but "Life Ranching" has a ring of authenticity (except maybe "speeding"). :)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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It's not easy to write a tyburn poem that follows the rules and also seems to make sense. I don't know much about ranching, but "Life Ranching" has a ring of authenticity (except maybe "speeding"). :)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thanks Don, yep that was a dang danger.
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Okay, I'm convinced. You must be a rancher.
Don
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The repetition in farming is a bit like life, a deja vu of work, work, work and a farmers life is full of long days of hard graft, but the rewards are great. I enjoyed your alliteration, you brought the scene to life, love Dolly x
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The repetition in farming is a bit like life, a deja vu of work, work, work and a farmers life is full of long days of hard graft, but the rewards are great. I enjoyed your alliteration, you brought the scene to life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Life Ranching", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. Good luck with the contest!
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"Life Ranching", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you
You're welcome.
Comment from godlucifer
your explanation was focal to its point. ranching has been around for many years and still this day it is part of the economy. your poem was created with a creativity. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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your explanation was focal to its point. ranching has been around for many years and still this day it is part of the economy. your poem was created with a creativity. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you
Comment from richie b
Quite a tongue twister. Your poem works. A fast
litnay that provides rapid images for the reader.
Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
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Quite a tongue twister. Your poem works. A fast
litnay that provides rapid images for the reader.
Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
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Richie thank you
Comment from Bentastic
I love this poem's concise explanation of a rancher's work. I have never lived on a ranch, but I appreciate this poem's insight into what it would be like. Thank you for sharing!
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I love this poem's concise explanation of a rancher's work. I have never lived on a ranch, but I appreciate this poem's insight into what it would be like. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
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Bentastic, thank you
Comment from ameen786
Hello friend, Tyburn is a challenging genre to compose and you did used perfect wordings to meet the requirements; except, please check the syllables for "Proceeding"-which has 3-syllables; and because of that your syllable count is not correct in the second last line; thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, Tyburn is a challenging genre to compose and you did used perfect wordings to meet the requirements; except, please check the syllables for "Proceeding"-which has 3-syllables; and because of that your syllable count is not correct in the second last line; thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Yikes, dropped the eye on the ball here, thanks and fixed.
