You Just Can't Kill It
Though many have attempted, both past and present...23 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Hi Yvette,
You are so right, once you have seeded and firmly planted the
seed of hope, no matter what else fails around it, hope will
always prevail, even through all the storms, droughts, and
crisis, either nature crisis, or personal one, in our lives..
HOPE WILL ALWAYS PREVAIL. Perfect pic for tone and theme!
Thanks for sharing dear. Always you make the simple to be
far more profound and significant in our lives than we realize!
Keep taking care of you friend! (:)
Love, Ronni
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
Hi Yvette,
You are so right, once you have seeded and firmly planted the
seed of hope, no matter what else fails around it, hope will
always prevail, even through all the storms, droughts, and
crisis, either nature crisis, or personal one, in our lives..
HOPE WILL ALWAYS PREVAIL. Perfect pic for tone and theme!
Thanks for sharing dear. Always you make the simple to be
far more profound and significant in our lives than we realize!
Keep taking care of you friend! (:)
Love, Ronni
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Some days I think it's harder to remember than others, but, hey, we'll get through to a brighter day on the other side, yeah?! ;) Thanx for this one, Beautiful Lady -- and I'm so sorry I'm behind! :/ :) Yvette
Comment from Mia Twysted
If life were a garden I could see this. I wonder what the plant would look like it if took a living form. I see it as being something that starts off so small and scared of the plants around it then grows to tower over them all.
Very well done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
If life were a garden I could see this. I wonder what the plant would look like it if took a living form. I see it as being something that starts off so small and scared of the plants around it then grows to tower over them all.
Very well done. Good luck.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami..
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love your entry for the contest, hope will survive no matter what:"In life's garden,
the most prolific plant
is HOPE...
Though vexed and tried,
Hope will survive!"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest, I think you have a winner here.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
Love your entry for the contest, hope will survive no matter what:"In life's garden,
the most prolific plant
is HOPE...
Though vexed and tried,
Hope will survive!"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest, I think you have a winner here.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable writing prompt.
The picture is a good match for the strong messsage.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable writing prompt.
The picture is a good match for the strong messsage.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
This is five beautiful lines about feeling of expectation that will stand the test of time. It's an expectation of one's desire. You can hope for anything forever. Hope will outlast most of our desires in life. Your poem eloquently shared these sediments. Yes, in life's garden garden, hope will always last longer than other values or emotions. We hope for things unseen (that's our faith). We can always lean on hope in life. Yes, I concur, Hope will always survive. It's our expectation that something will happen, one day. Yes, it has been vexed and tried! Enjoyable read. Nicely done. Happy writing.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
Hello,
This is five beautiful lines about feeling of expectation that will stand the test of time. It's an expectation of one's desire. You can hope for anything forever. Hope will outlast most of our desires in life. Your poem eloquently shared these sediments. Yes, in life's garden garden, hope will always last longer than other values or emotions. We hope for things unseen (that's our faith). We can always lean on hope in life. Yes, I concur, Hope will always survive. It's our expectation that something will happen, one day. Yes, it has been vexed and tried! Enjoyable read. Nicely done. Happy writing.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
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vous Ítes si bienvenu
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a grand thought for the 20 Syllables writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
This is a grand thought for the 20 Syllables writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"You Just Can't Kill It", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Hope will indeed survive. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
"You Just Can't Kill It", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Hope will indeed survive. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
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Tres bien, mon ami.
Comment from DeboraDyess
I'm going to have to give you a virtual six. This is wonderful. The poem itself is full of hope. It's not 'daisies and butterflies'; it admits that life can be hard. But hope ... if that survives, we'll be fine.
I didn't see any errors or need for improvement. And excellent contest entry.
Be blessed,
Deb
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
I'm going to have to give you a virtual six. This is wonderful. The poem itself is full of hope. It's not 'daisies and butterflies'; it admits that life can be hard. But hope ... if that survives, we'll be fine.
I didn't see any errors or need for improvement. And excellent contest entry.
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
Comment from lightink
The poem describes Hope as a resilient (yet valuable) plant in 'life's garden'. It may not be doing too well but it prevails - as the strongly worded title states, as well.
Kind message.
Great presentation.
The syllable count is spot on.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
The poem describes Hope as a resilient (yet valuable) plant in 'life's garden'. It may not be doing too well but it prevails - as the strongly worded title states, as well.
Kind message.
Great presentation.
The syllable count is spot on.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty syllable poem about having hope that will last for a long time when we depend on hold and believe in what we hope for.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
A very well-written twenty syllable poem about having hope that will last for a long time when we depend on hold and believe in what we hope for.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Merci, mon ami.