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Comment from Mia Twysted
This came off as a story for children. It showed that you can find friends even when you least expect it. However, it was slow to read as I could not find an inner rhythm.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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This came off as a story for children. It showed that you can find friends even when you least expect it. However, it was slow to read as I could not find an inner rhythm.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Well it's not meant to have any rhythm it's just a r like a fairytale but about the sea.
Ricky
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Life in the sea is the same as life on Earth, survival of the fittest: I find this lines very poetic "
Once upon an ocean see their lives many many a pretty shell.
Shells more pure than white sparkle in the sugared sands at night." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Life in the sea is the same as life on Earth, survival of the fittest: I find this lines very poetic "
Once upon an ocean see their lives many many a pretty shell.
Shells more pure than white sparkle in the sugared sands at night." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Always have fun writing fairy tales.
But when I can combine them with nature like this?
It's even more enjoyable!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024