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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
'I Lost Paradise and where God's now sending me?'
Amen.
"Pure Heaven!"
Where else? This is the only place open to some that are specially called!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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'I Lost Paradise and where God's now sending me?'
Amen.
"Pure Heaven!"
Where else? This is the only place open to some that are specially called!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Hi Barbara.
It's funny how non religious people; when it comes to a point in their life; when's death threatening?
All of a sudden they find religion and want to go to heaven?
But normally at that point it's way too late!
Now, would you not agree?
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer your color schemed is so deliberately luring me in without having read not one word. But from reading I must also inform you that your style of writing is so unique and I love your story line and final stanza
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Writer your color schemed is so deliberately luring me in without having read not one word. But from reading I must also inform you that your style of writing is so unique and I love your story line and final stanza
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Anytime I'm writing especially in first person for my son of course has been going 17 + years I get extremely deep and serious.
And I really appreciate you honored him by giving six stars to this!
Doctor Ricky and Jay.