Life's Joyful Sculpting
It's written on your face...27 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
How true these words are! This is a great and powerful entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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How true these words are! This is a great and powerful entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
penpal: wonderful photo of a person laughing out loud. The lines show clearly that she was full of love and joy. She probably never took time for herself with moisture lotion and worked hard. Hope she had a large family. Great entry. flylikeaneagle
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penpal: wonderful photo of a person laughing out loud. The lines show clearly that she was full of love and joy. She probably never took time for herself with moisture lotion and worked hard. Hope she had a large family. Great entry. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from Antonia Murguia
This is simply well said. I can relate through my mama in heaven and now even myself. The picture is priceless. This poem and picture captures life's aging wonderfully.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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This is simply well said. I can relate through my mama in heaven and now even myself. The picture is priceless. This poem and picture captures life's aging wonderfully.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Antonia, for your wonderful comments and those lovely, shining stars! Here's wishing you an increase in your laugh lines this week!
Comment from mermaids
So true, our faces can reflect the joy we have experienced in life. This is a happy poem with an excellent theme. Great use of words and your 3-5-3 form paints a clear picture. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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So true, our faces can reflect the joy we have experienced in life. This is a happy poem with an excellent theme. Great use of words and your 3-5-3 form paints a clear picture. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from zanya
A simply exquisite 5-5-3 - poetry melding into art - who can really say where one ends and the other begins - not a syllable wasted - this one belongs in the winner's enclosure
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A simply exquisite 5-5-3 - poetry melding into art - who can really say where one ends and the other begins - not a syllable wasted - this one belongs in the winner's enclosure
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Zanya, for your wonderful comments and those lovely, shining stars! Here's wishing you an increase in your laugh lines this week!
Comment from karenina
I hope you win. I confess here and now I went to vote for YOURS and my husband interrupted me and somehow I ended up voting for someone elses..... No way to take it back to if you lose my one it was a win...because someone else got your vote! (sigh....) Perfect image and poem! SO SORRY!---Karenina
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I hope you win. I confess here and now I went to vote for YOURS and my husband interrupted me and somehow I ended up voting for someone elses..... No way to take it back to if you lose my one it was a win...because someone else got your vote! (sigh....) Perfect image and poem! SO SORRY!---Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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No worries, my friend! Thank you.
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Argh! I hate being dumb!--Karenina
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I think you've done a super job of sharing a message in such a few amount of words. I like the message here -- the person you speak of seems to have chosen to laugh through life instead of cry - sometimes we forget it CAN be a choice. *smile*
You've also done a great job choosing an image to accompany this poem. The individual in the photo is precious. *smile*
Your syllable count is just right and now that I have read through all the entries, I'm pretty sure yours is my selection. I've got to check one more thing --
Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I think you've done a super job of sharing a message in such a few amount of words. I like the message here -- the person you speak of seems to have chosen to laugh through life instead of cry - sometimes we forget it CAN be a choice. *smile*
You've also done a great job choosing an image to accompany this poem. The individual in the photo is precious. *smile*
Your syllable count is just right and now that I have read through all the entries, I'm pretty sure yours is my selection. I've got to check one more thing --
Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many, many thanks, my friend!
Comment from Irene Bratton
Everything about this piece is beautiful - the title, the image, the black background that makes everything stand out, and the font is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Everything about this piece is beautiful - the title, the image, the black background that makes everything stand out, and the font is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Well, this is an exceptionally beautiful portrait and I love it because of the aged hands and face. Such joy and beauty in those eyes, that smile. Your 3-5-3 does it an honor.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Well, this is an exceptionally beautiful portrait and I love it because of the aged hands and face. Such joy and beauty in those eyes, that smile. Your 3-5-3 does it an honor.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from June Sargent
This is so true. If we had no lines, we would be plain plastic. We are human with flesh that is sculptured and etched through time into a thing of beauty. Lovely sentiments.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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This is so true. If we had no lines, we would be plain plastic. We are human with flesh that is sculptured and etched through time into a thing of beauty. Lovely sentiments.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
