Life's Joyful Sculpting
It's written on your face...27 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yvette, I can clearly see why this piece won. You have said SO much in only eleven syllables. Your personification of the laugh lines is delightful, and the alliteration is a great enhancement.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Yvette, I can clearly see why this piece won. You have said SO much in only eleven syllables. Your personification of the laugh lines is delightful, and the alliteration is a great enhancement.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Janice -- I apologize for being so far behind (gonna sell this crazy house soon hopefully cuz I'm damn tired of making it 'look wonderful and inviting' - lol!)... :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
I had voted for your post, but unfortunately had not reviewed it.
Congrats on the win in this contest. Your artwork was exceptionally paired with your 3-5-3 poem. You insightful words magnifies the woman's joyful expression.
Mark
Mark
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Yvette,
I had voted for your post, but unfortunately had not reviewed it.
Congrats on the win in this contest. Your artwork was exceptionally paired with your 3-5-3 poem. You insightful words magnifies the woman's joyful expression.
Mark
Mark
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and the congrats, Mark -- I apologize for being so far behind (gonna sell this crazy house soon hopefully cuz I'm damn tired of making it 'look wonderful and inviting' - lol!)... :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
Many kudos for winning the contest with this 3-5-3 and reinforcing painting. I admired your use of alliteration and the matching text color. Here's to "life well lived"! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Many kudos for winning the contest with this 3-5-3 and reinforcing painting. I admired your use of alliteration and the matching text color. Here's to "life well lived"! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Another belated thank you, Joan -- have a wonderful weekend! ;)
Comment from MissMerri
I love this poem! The lines tell the story, don't they? The fact that you said the lines were singing songs really spoke to me. Music denotes happiness and joy and that, to me, is a must in a life well lived. Thanks for this inspiring poem. I'm glad to see it was a winner! Congratulations.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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I love this poem! The lines tell the story, don't they? The fact that you said the lines were singing songs really spoke to me. Music denotes happiness and joy and that, to me, is a must in a life well lived. Thanks for this inspiring poem. I'm glad to see it was a winner! Congratulations.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Oh, this is such a wonderful surprise, Merri!! :) Thank you so much for this awesome review and those bright, shining stars, my lady -- I apologize for being so far behind (gonna sell this crazy house soon hopefully cuz I'm damn tired of making it 'look wonderful and inviting' - lol!)... :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece has a clear story and the picture is a beautiful match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece has a clear story and the picture is a beautiful match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful beautiful short poem about smiling and the wrinkles on our faces. I love the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest. A fine entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Beautiful beautiful short poem about smiling and the wrinkles on our faces. I love the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest. A fine entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from Loren .
Indeed, a joyful face and its character further etched with poetic stanzas. A very appropriate offering for this contest. I like the short poems, most of them I can understand :) Best of luck in the contest. No worries, I'm not entering : ) Loren
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Indeed, a joyful face and its character further etched with poetic stanzas. A very appropriate offering for this contest. I like the short poems, most of them I can understand :) Best of luck in the contest. No worries, I'm not entering : ) Loren
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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LOL!! ;) :) Thanx for the awesome review, Loren! ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Life's Joyful Sculpting, has the right set up and bring notice of the contorted countenance of the faces which reflect so many years of living.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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This 3-5-3, Life's Joyful Sculpting, has the right set up and bring notice of the contorted countenance of the faces which reflect so many years of living.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a metamorphosis abut life's fingerprints on our faces: "Touched by time,
laugh lines sing songs of
life well lived" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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What a metamorphosis abut life's fingerprints on our faces: "Touched by time,
laugh lines sing songs of
life well lived" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, my friend.
Comment from Melanie White
I like the hopeful message of the poem. You did a great job pairing your poem with an appropriate picture. You said a lot with very few syllables.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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I like the hopeful message of the poem. You did a great job pairing your poem with an appropriate picture. You said a lot with very few syllables.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
