Lake Lincoln
Could ghosts seek revenage?2 total reviews
Comment from humpwhistle
Hmm, I take it Jeff and Nancy met up with Jim and Janice (lots of Js there), and spent the night. I wonder if Jeff and Nancy's parents had some affiliation to the Tidal Base Electric Company? That might tie things up a bit. Just a thought.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Hmm, I take it Jeff and Nancy met up with Jim and Janice (lots of Js there), and spent the night. I wonder if Jeff and Nancy's parents had some affiliation to the Tidal Base Electric Company? That might tie things up a bit. Just a thought.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Interesting thought about tie-in. I will think about it.
Thanks for the read and review, idea much appreciated.
Comment from roof35
Some typos I mention so you can fix them: 1) purchase (d) 2) three day (s) 3) he breathe (d).
This made me shiver and since I think that was your intent, I have to say this is very good writing. It shows good imagination, you hooked me early, and carried me right along to the scary end. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Some typos I mention so you can fix them: 1) purchase (d) 2) three day (s) 3) he breathe (d).
This made me shiver and since I think that was your intent, I have to say this is very good writing. It shows good imagination, you hooked me early, and carried me right along to the scary end. Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the read, review and catching the typos. Really appreciate your time. I will edit.
