Beautiful Poetry from Long Beach Is
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Comment from amada
I like the sea, and the beach and all the sand so I stopped to read your poem. I like the descriptions a lot, I have a doubt on the like the sea having a touch of innocence; I almost drowned a couple of years ago; it has an incredible pulling force.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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I like the sea, and the beach and all the sand so I stopped to read your poem. I like the descriptions a lot, I have a doubt on the like the sea having a touch of innocence; I almost drowned a couple of years ago; it has an incredible pulling force.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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I'm every riptide I've ever been caught in which in my lifetime a 65 years about a dozen.
I was always able a Little help from God to come back home.
and not only learn to appreciate the power of the ocean and sea?
Bt it's beauty.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from mermaids
I like how you mention the show beneath the sea, so true. There is much below the surface that takes place. Excellent use of words and a strong steady beat that feels like the power of the ocean.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I like how you mention the show beneath the sea, so true. There is much below the surface that takes place. Excellent use of words and a strong steady beat that feels like the power of the ocean.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I've been working on that book on Long Beach island for going on two months I think I'm getting it down pretty good?
Sun poisoning twice...
Captured turtles twice...
And hot bikinis with tattooed women everywhere!
I guess it can't be all that bad?
LOL!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024