Construction Basics 101
Seems some might need reminding...25 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Seems some might need reminding...
Construction Basics 101
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Great presentation.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Seems some might need reminding...
Construction Basics 101
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Great presentation.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy. 8-)
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very clever and witty entry in that contest. I like the thought. Enjoyed your artistic presentation and visuals.
Good loyck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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A very clever and witty entry in that contest. I like the thought. Enjoyed your artistic presentation and visuals.
Good loyck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thank you, E-M. 8-)
Comment from June Sargent
These are words of wisdom here. The wider the chasm, the longer it will take to build the bridge. We need to stop and think about what we personally do as individuals everyday. Do our actions unite or divide?
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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These are words of wisdom here. The wider the chasm, the longer it will take to build the bridge. We need to stop and think about what we personally do as individuals everyday. Do our actions unite or divide?
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you, June. 8-)
Comment from karenina
Smart, witty clever, fine correlation to current events Impactful in 17syllables. You say more and make more sense than 99% of our very well paid politicians! But then, politicians are often blind to the obvious!
--Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Smart, witty clever, fine correlation to current events Impactful in 17syllables. You say more and make more sense than 99% of our very well paid politicians! But then, politicians are often blind to the obvious!
--Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Lol! Unless something benefits them, you can pretty much forget about it, yeah? Thank you for your review, Karenina.
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Yup. Politicians do not score high on my selfless sacrifice scale! (smile)--Karenina
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this thought-provoking piece that conveys a powerful message about bridge building.
The U.S. has a long way to go when it comes to this matter.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this thought-provoking piece that conveys a powerful message about bridge building.
The U.S. has a long way to go when it comes to this matter.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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You are so right! Thank you for your review. 8-)
Comment from estory
I liked how you worked that last line for the dramatic effect: we get that feeling of walking out on the span in the middle of the chasm. "One must first seek actions that don't/ Widen the chasm." Its almost like the bridge gives way underneath us and we fall into the abyss. estory
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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I liked how you worked that last line for the dramatic effect: we get that feeling of walking out on the span in the middle of the chasm. "One must first seek actions that don't/ Widen the chasm." Its almost like the bridge gives way underneath us and we fall into the abyss. estory
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you, E. 8-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration,
along with the use of
one continuous thought.
-The message is good, not only
for bridges, but for life situations, too.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration,
along with the use of
one continuous thought.
-The message is good, not only
for bridges, but for life situations, too.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Pam. 8-)
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Stopping the rot first is a wise action and then we can build bridges, a few words with a special meaning and I enjoyed your viewpoint here, a clever 5-7-5, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Stopping the rot first is a wise action and then we can build bridges, a few words with a special meaning and I enjoyed your viewpoint here, a clever 5-7-5, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2020
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Thank you. 8-)
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray you are having a beautiful bless day. This is a cute reminder to those who do construction to make sure they know about chasm in the payment when they work on the pavement. You have selected a good photo to reflect your informative message in your 5-7-5 poem. I like your three lines. Yes, you need to know what you are doing when building a bridge. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Hello,
I pray you are having a beautiful bless day. This is a cute reminder to those who do construction to make sure they know about chasm in the payment when they work on the pavement. You have selected a good photo to reflect your informative message in your 5-7-5 poem. I like your three lines. Yes, you need to know what you are doing when building a bridge. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you. 8-)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Construction Basics 101, has the right set up and suggests basic engineering can be used even in metaphorical situations where the span of understanding requires that both parties agree to at least not move further apart.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This 5-7-5, Construction Basics 101, has the right set up and suggests basic engineering can be used even in metaphorical situations where the span of understanding requires that both parties agree to at least not move further apart.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you! 8-)
