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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Just a past printed message for some widow's tissue?

Oh wow this line caught me and turned on the tears. This piece is excellently written, sad and dark, but excellent

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks Barbara.
    I first found out about it when I saw it was normal to have to bail out Uncle Craig's house beginning of the season.
    And I later learned more about that horrible storm.
    we actually had us a mini repeat in the year 2000 flooded out all the businesses on Long Beach boulevard with three feet of water.
    Ricky
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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An interesting offering for starting of the day. The water sometimes is a graveyard that sealed so many memories and lives : "And, the shore tis now waiting the pounding!
Messages ever sounding.
Confounding uselessness?
Is now the shores instructor"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks again.
    For your time and Review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024