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Fine Poetry

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Comment from roof35
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This is a well written poem of a big disaster. It is very sad as your words of a resort becoming no more than a newspaper issue say. Your illustration, while of the sea, is almost too pretty for the story.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    When I first learned about that northeaster I was a child 7 or 8 years old.
    We would vacation for a couple days, at first, at my Uncle Craig's housein Shipbottom.
    And, I thought it was normal the beginning of the season?
    To bail out the house!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from papa55mike
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We have the same things in tornadoes in the south. Big ones that wipe out everything. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Well I got a taste of it at 8 years old by having a bailout Uncle Craig's house the beginning of the season.
    I thought that was normal. I found out about that storm.
    We had another one in the year 2000 but it happened in the winter it's flooded out the business I worked at.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024