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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from Jacob David Collins
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Yes, Facebook and other social media sites such as Twitter does seem to be the place we're people feel the need to voice their opinions on another person. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Indeed. Thank you for Reading and Rating this poem offering.
Comment from roof35
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While this a clever entry for the two line poem contest, I do not believe you followed all the rules. You have the end rhymes but you do not have the inner rhymes--see the Fan Story example given to understand.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Thank you for the Review, a slight oversight a Correction has been made, Thanks for pointing that out.