Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry. I like the rhyme scheme used. Your lines flow well with good imagery. The picture is a good pairing, too.

Suggestion---last line. . . .instead of 'thinks' (are you really happy??? )perhaps 'knows.
Best wishes,
Jan

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020

Thanks! I have fixed it. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Who cares what everybody thinks, are you happy? What a wonderfully written poem with a huge emoji.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I hope to win. Cross my fingers.

Comment from joycetreasures

Excellent

Hello,
I pray your day is going well. I love all Happy poems! We need more laughter and happiness in our world today. I enjoyed reading this upbeat happy poem. Your message is clear; many friends who have made your happy, and discipline parents who kept you on the straight and narrow. More importantly, in the end you are happy. This is a blessing, I know everyone in our world today is not happy. Well-done. I love the photo you used. Happy writing:-)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

reply by joycetreasures on 30-Jun-2020

I did enjoy it. Take care.