Old Glory - New Mission
We all need to respect what we have, or it will be gone!3 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This is so inspiring and so scary. I have often worried that our country will be taken over from the inside in just the way you have told it. Your story is beautifully written and so insightful. I give you and Billy Love six stars.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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This is so inspiring and so scary. I have often worried that our country will be taken over from the inside in just the way you have told it. Your story is beautifully written and so insightful. I give you and Billy Love six stars.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you Judy for the incredible support. When I wrote a similar story 8 years ago, little did I know that my step-son would be engaged to a very nice woman. My point - her last name is LOVE.
Things happen the way they are supposed to, and I sure hope this country gets a grip and starts working together. It is shameful.
Many thanks,
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Comment from thorney
Hi there.
A really stirring patriotic tale (and I'm a Brit) for an entry into this contest. I hope you do well.
A couple of things for you to consider, they are just my thoughts, and you may think them no better than the originals
Billy was standing in front of a sign, warning anyone who displayed the flag of the United States, would be shot on sight.
now-familiar
My tears soon reinforced the idea that this was going to be the day we started taking our country back.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards Pete,
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Hi there.
A really stirring patriotic tale (and I'm a Brit) for an entry into this contest. I hope you do well.
A couple of things for you to consider, they are just my thoughts, and you may think them no better than the originals
Billy was standing in front of a sign, warning anyone who displayed the flag of the United States, would be shot on sight.
now-familiar
My tears soon reinforced the idea that this was going to be the day we started taking our country back.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards Pete,
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thanks Pete for reading one of my posts and for the very nice review.
I also appreciate you taking the time to make it even better. More people, when the opportunity presents itself, should help others without being asked. Starts a snowball with a smile.
Thanks again,
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Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought this was an interesting take on the contest. I think we all need to take pride in our country and hope that we can make it better. I thought this was well written. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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I thought this was an interesting take on the contest. I think we all need to take pride in our country and hope that we can make it better. I thought this was well written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
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Thank you Jacob for reading one of my posts and for the very nice review. Many of us are forgetting the many sacrifices made to give us what we have today. I'm not happy with what I see across the country, and wish we would remember it's not you or me, it is US.
Thanks again,
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