Change (It Isn't Too Late)
It isn't too late to change for good.3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Good advice to all - no one should want to be like a "jerk." And because of our faith in Jesus, God "treasures" us and helps us to live the life He wants us to live. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Good advice to all - no one should want to be like a "jerk." And because of our faith in Jesus, God "treasures" us and helps us to live the life He wants us to live. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I hope I win. Cross my fingers.
Comment from Edward Escobar
I clearly enjoyed your writing, especially since it relates to our Father in heaven, the provider, the presider of many other things...spiritually speaking. For when I was lost His grace led me back and I am find with that
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I clearly enjoyed your writing, especially since it relates to our Father in heaven, the provider, the presider of many other things...spiritually speaking. For when I was lost His grace led me back and I am find with that
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Jan Anderegg
A great reminder of how important it is to be kind and nice. You are correct in saying that holding on to anger and mean-spiritedness is hurting those who do it.
I didn't see any errors here. No edits needed. It's great.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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A great reminder of how important it is to be kind and nice. You are correct in saying that holding on to anger and mean-spiritedness is hurting those who do it.
I didn't see any errors here. No edits needed. It's great.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
