Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
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Comment from Deepali Pradhan
Liked your poem very much. Even though it is described as a free verse poem you've have incorporated a bit of rhyme which enhances the overall poetic experience. Good luck with your writings
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Liked your poem very much. Even though it is described as a free verse poem you've have incorporated a bit of rhyme which enhances the overall poetic experience. Good luck with your writings
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering. May God Bless you and your family.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very interesting choice of a subject and your last line restores chaos again:"When we Stop Believing in God's Word and Faith's Love comes All regret! " Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Very interesting choice of a subject and your last line restores chaos again:"When we Stop Believing in God's Word and Faith's Love comes All regret! " Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you for Reading and Rating this poem offering, Blessings.