Comment from
Diana Kane
Great job staying within the syllable count. With everything that's on the television, you start to wonder what is happening? Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
Hello Diane and thank you very much for your wonderful review and insights.
Comment from
Jan Anderegg
Great poem! And these words...
What the heck happened to America
... are the same ones I ask myself every morning. Lol
I didn't see any errors. Well done. I enjoyed this!
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
Hello Jan, I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.