Patrick Plays Along
A dog playing.2 total reviews
Comment from roof35
A happy dog makes happy people at our house, too. You followed the rules and wrote a true poem. Your picture, of course, pairs perfectly with your words.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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A happy dog makes happy people at our house, too. You followed the rules and wrote a true poem. Your picture, of course, pairs perfectly with your words.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a fun contest entry, Mystery Author, with an adorable picture. Your syllable count per line is correct. The last line need to repeat the words from the first line. I believe you have time to revise. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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This is a fun contest entry, Mystery Author, with an adorable picture. Your syllable count per line is correct. The last line need to repeat the words from the first line. I believe you have time to revise. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thanks! I will check it. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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I have fixed it. Thanks!