Hopeful Eyes
Looking for a rescue dog.7 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
This is so sweet. Who could resist those hopeful eyes? Your syllable count is right on and you added effective rhyme with pick me and puppy. I always want to adopt the pet that's featured in the Sunday edition of our newspaper. I think "calls" might be more effective than "called." Best of luck. judi
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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This is so sweet. Who could resist those hopeful eyes? Your syllable count is right on and you added effective rhyme with pick me and puppy. I always want to adopt the pet that's featured in the Sunday edition of our newspaper. I think "calls" might be more effective than "called." Best of luck. judi
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I agree. I have edited. Thanks for the suggestion.
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You're very welcome. It's a small thing, but present tense adds to the impact. judi
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You are so. I have to remember that. Thanks.
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is an excellent 2-5-2 contest entry. The dog in your image is adorable. His eyes say it all. He looks very hopeful. Good Job with your poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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This is an excellent 2-5-2 contest entry. The dog in your image is adorable. His eyes say it all. He looks very hopeful. Good Job with your poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks for the read and the review. Appreciated.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Wow! A sure winner in the contest. It's very difficult to write anything substantive with so few words allowed, but you achieved it with this adorable little poem. Add to that the lovely photo and you have an impeccable presentation. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Wow! A sure winner in the contest. It's very difficult to write anything substantive with so few words allowed, but you achieved it with this adorable little poem. Add to that the lovely photo and you have an impeccable presentation. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Much appreciated.
Comment from zanya
AH-H-H doesn't this picture make your heart just melt - and the words of the poem reinforce the idea of a puppy waiting impatiently for his forever home -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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AH-H-H doesn't this picture make your heart just melt - and the words of the poem reinforce the idea of a puppy waiting impatiently for his forever home -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks much for your review. This picture is why I stay away from rescue shelters. Such a doggie would be hard to resist.
Comment from roof35
This certainly speaks volumes both with its words and with the illustration you chose. Who could resist this puppy? This is very nicely done. I give you five stars.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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This certainly speaks volumes both with its words and with the illustration you chose. Who could resist this puppy? This is very nicely done. I give you five stars.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from RodG
It would be very difficult not to "pick" and take home that puppy in the picture. That is why I do not get close to our town's humane society. I would not come home empty-handed. Will the poet? Rodk
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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It would be very difficult not to "pick" and take home that puppy in the picture. That is why I do not get close to our town's humane society. I would not come home empty-handed. Will the poet? Rodk
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Feel the same way you do. But for now we are sticking to our cement goose. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a solid poem, I like the taletelling, clear and expressive, with the photo and I think the expression is good without the photo; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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This is a solid poem, I like the taletelling, clear and expressive, with the photo and I think the expression is good without the photo; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this and wish you good luck in the Contest. Keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
