Evanescence
The mind's memoirs aren't forever...22 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery and a nice touch of alliteration.
Memories fade, but hopefully, the good ones last a long time.
Excellent art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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You've written an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery and a nice touch of alliteration.
Memories fade, but hopefully, the good ones last a long time.
Excellent art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Merci, Robert!
Comment from Susan X Smith
You made the most of the limited syllable count in this little poem. It is an excellent contest entry, complemented by a striking picture. Good luck in the voting.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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You made the most of the limited syllable count in this little poem. It is an excellent contest entry, complemented by a striking picture. Good luck in the voting.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Merci, Susan!
