Summertime Reverie
The mind can do some amazing things...19 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, Summertime Reverie, has the proper syllable count and finds joy in the summer-inspired colors of love and happiness.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This thirty-syllable poem, Summertime Reverie, has the proper syllable count and finds joy in the summer-inspired colors of love and happiness.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this little 'flight of fantasy', Bill -- sometimes you just gotta let the muses pretend and your spirits soar!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, your forte, if I may hazard (and I DO mean hazard -- EVERYTHING you post is wonderful) a guess... Your fantasy genre, however, seems other-worldly. This is beautiful, Yvette. I see why it won!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Ah, your forte, if I may hazard (and I DO mean hazard -- EVERYTHING you post is wonderful) a guess... Your fantasy genre, however, seems other-worldly. This is beautiful, Yvette. I see why it won!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this little 'flight of fantasy', Dawn -- sometimes you just gotta let the muses pretend and your spirits soar!! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome. I don't think I am going to bother a lot with FanStory anymore.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! Here I think you have not had time to write and you must have been posting anonymously and winning contests! This one is beautiful, too! Congratulations!!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Wow! Here I think you have not had time to write and you must have been posting anonymously and winning contests! This one is beautiful, too! Congratulations!!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Naah... sometimes at the end of the day, it's a good escape to jump in and just do a 'short one' for my 'escape from reality' - lol!! Sometimes you just gotta let the muses pretend and your spirits soar!! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a poetic 30-syllable poem with an inviting tone. I found 's' alliteration with 'sunbeams' and 'stardust.' Fun end rhymes with dreams/sunbeams. Long 'i' assonance with sky/night, 'ride. No wonder it was a winner :)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This is a poetic 30-syllable poem with an inviting tone. I found 's' alliteration with 'sunbeams' and 'stardust.' Fun end rhymes with dreams/sunbeams. Long 'i' assonance with sky/night, 'ride. No wonder it was a winner :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this little 'flight of fantasy', Crystie -- sometimes you just gotta let the muses pretend and your spirits soar!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely colourful and descriptive 30 syllables poem Yvette, -
finger-paint dreams
with bright sunbeams - love those lines in this really bright and uplifting presentation. Congrats on the contest win,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Lovely colourful and descriptive 30 syllables poem Yvette, -
finger-paint dreams
with bright sunbeams - love those lines in this really bright and uplifting presentation. Congrats on the contest win,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this little 'flight of fantasy', Valda -- sometimes you just gotta let the muses pretend and your spirits soar!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
This looks like an exploding Creamsickle. So fresh and summery. What a beautiful, summertime offering, dear one. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! An extra star for your crown.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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This looks like an exploding Creamsickle. So fresh and summery. What a beautiful, summertime offering, dear one. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! An extra star for your crown.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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As I said, I'm so far behind - ugh! :) :) But thank you, THANK YOU for these awesome stars, Lady Sal -- you are always such a breath of fresh air!! ;) Take care and I'll be caught up by maybe August... lol! Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Fantastic imagery in artwork, colors, and verse.
Your rainbow and the couple's relationship are encapsulated perfectly in just 30 syllables!
Within your poetic license, you chose initial caps for each line. IMHO, it reads better if Watch, With, and And are not capitalized.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Fantastic imagery in artwork, colors, and verse.
Your rainbow and the couple's relationship are encapsulated perfectly in just 30 syllables!
Within your poetic license, you chose initial caps for each line. IMHO, it reads better if Watch, With, and And are not capitalized.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Sometimes we cap, sometimes we don't .... who knows the powers behind them... LOL! Thank you for the wonderful review and stars, Mark!!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great poem entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt. This is a thought provoking poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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This is a great poem entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt. This is a thought provoking poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Earthlover
This poem stands out in 2 ways. First the photo really grabs our attention with the bright colors and the image is captivating to look at. Then your choice of words add even more color with the imagination that comes naturally while reading these descriptive phrases.
I really enjoyed this creative poem.
Thanks for sharing...
Earthlover
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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This poem stands out in 2 ways. First the photo really grabs our attention with the bright colors and the image is captivating to look at. Then your choice of words add even more color with the imagination that comes naturally while reading these descriptive phrases.
I really enjoyed this creative poem.
Thanks for sharing...
Earthlover
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Such a wonderful review, Earthlover - thank you, thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the haiku feeling to it. Love the presentation. My favorite so far.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the haiku feeling to it. Love the presentation. My favorite so far.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Such a wonderful review, Gypsy - thank you, thank you!!
