The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Life's Dark Moments "Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from lyenochka
I like your reflection on the quote from Aristotle. You did a great job with a monorhyme throughout these quatrains of unusually long lines. Praise God for His Light that dissolves all our darkness.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I like your reflection on the quote from Aristotle. You did a great job with a monorhyme throughout these quatrains of unusually long lines. Praise God for His Light that dissolves all our darkness.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you for Your Review and Kind compliments. I seem to return to a mono rhyme format on messaging poem types.
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Interesting! Perhaps you'd like the monometric poetry form. I just learned that this year from our Potlatch Club (under the Social Menu)
Comment from Wabigoon
QC Poet-
"distrubed."
Oh, I don't know, as I often say. Do you "clear" your mind...for what? Planting? This is so abstract that I do not know how to respond to it. It is about using certain operations like prayer or the singing of hymns to "clear the mind." Of what? Darkness? Maybe that darkness is necessary? Maybe it should be gone into? I cannot tell from your words.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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QC Poet-
"distrubed."
Oh, I don't know, as I often say. Do you "clear" your mind...for what? Planting? This is so abstract that I do not know how to respond to it. It is about using certain operations like prayer or the singing of hymns to "clear the mind." Of what? Darkness? Maybe that darkness is necessary? Maybe it should be gone into? I cannot tell from your words.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the Comments, Review and Interest in this poem offering. A little riddle wrapped up in a veil of perceptions. Blessings,