In Awe
In the presence of the Creator9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, In Awe, has the proper syllable count and, along with its reversibility, presents a stunning tribute to natural beauty and our connection to God. Nice.
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This thirty-syllable poem, In Awe, has the proper syllable count and, along with its reversibility, presents a stunning tribute to natural beauty and our connection to God. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great poem entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt. This is a thought provoking poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
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This is a great poem entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt. This is a thought provoking poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Unique form reading backwards.
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Unique form reading backwards.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
Comment from Cozmelina
I like this, it speaks of beauty and wonder, I get the fact of silence and wonderment very clever wording and I guess if you visit this place for the first time it could leave you speechless. Good writing.
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I like this, it speaks of beauty and wonder, I get the fact of silence and wonderment very clever wording and I guess if you visit this place for the first time it could leave you speechless. Good writing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
All that was required here was a thirty syllable poem. You have really raised the ante by writing something that is not only fully compliant with that instruction, but which has pretty much the same reason read either from top to bottom or bottom to top. Ingenious!
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All that was required here was a thirty syllable poem. You have really raised the ante by writing something that is not only fully compliant with that instruction, but which has pretty much the same reason read either from top to bottom or bottom to top. Ingenious!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Nature can often astound and bring the magic of creation to our eyes and instil its wonder upon us. You brought the scenes here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Nature can often astound and bring the magic of creation to our eyes and instil its wonder upon us. You brought the scenes here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
Comment from RodG
Imagine the picture is not there. What is the Speaker in awe of? One suggestion would be to have the answer in your title. I prefer specific details in the poem itself. Capitalize His in your last line. Rod
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Imagine the picture is not there. What is the Speaker in awe of? One suggestion would be to have the answer in your title. I prefer specific details in the poem itself. Capitalize His in your last line. Rod
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Rod,
Thanks for your review. I'm surprised your asked the question as to who the speaker is in awe of? The answer is the Creator. Your suggestion is appreciated.
Cheers,
Eugene
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I thought he was in awe of God AND His creation, the Grand Canyon.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely offering of testimony to a grand creator whose majestic creations leave us in complete awe and gratitude!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!! ;)
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Such a lovely offering of testimony to a grand creator whose majestic creations leave us in complete awe and gratitude!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!! ;)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Wow! This is a elegant and eloquent write, surely better than our entry. The photo that's accompanying this poem is flawless. Really great read. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
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Wow! This is a elegant and eloquent write, surely better than our entry. The photo that's accompanying this poem is flawless. Really great read. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
