Comment from Bobby Cunningham

Excellent

This is a very clever and creative write. We were captivated throughout, our eyes and brains were eagerly pursuing every line. There is a typo, " The two boys I'm arrived at the party ". Have a wonderful night.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks Bobbie and Millie.
I just corrected adding added another 30 words to make it more powerful.
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Bobby Cunningham on 26-Jun-2020

We're so grateful that we could do anything no matter how small
to be of help. Have a wonderful night.

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020

Thanks much appreciated.
Ricky

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

We all have lessons to learn as we move through life. Some are harder to digest than others. At times it seems more than we can handle, but the good Lord doesn't leave us with more than we can bear. I think errie should be spelled eerie.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020

Thanks Earl I caught the error.
Ricky