These Eight Legs of Mine
A spidery children's poem for fun29 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You almost had me forgetting that I hate these little 8 legged creatures with this cute poem about these clever and versatile 8 legs. Great children's poem for this spider contest. I wish you luck with it,
cheers
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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You almost had me forgetting that I hate these little 8 legged creatures with this cute poem about these clever and versatile 8 legs. Great children's poem for this spider contest. I wish you luck with it,
cheers
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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LOL!! Thank you for such an awesome review!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sweet, interesting, and creative. This poem
will definitely appeal to children. I found the poem to convey a
great imagination and a fun way to look at a spider! The artwork
compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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The author's words are sweet, interesting, and creative. This poem
will definitely appeal to children. I found the poem to convey a
great imagination and a fun way to look at a spider! The artwork
compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A spidery children's poem for fun
These Eight Legs of Mine
Hello, Anonymous,
This is a very cute and clever children's poem. A fine entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt contest. I love the presentation. I kept thinking of the song... This light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine. It's a really cute poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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A spidery children's poem for fun
These Eight Legs of Mine
Hello, Anonymous,
This is a very cute and clever children's poem. A fine entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt contest. I love the presentation. I kept thinking of the song... This light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine. It's a really cute poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy Blue!
Comment from RodG
This poem has a light-hearted character most young readers will enjoy--especially those who love to dance. You have given your spider PERSONALITY as well as talent. Rod
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This poem has a light-hearted character most young readers will enjoy--especially those who love to dance. You have given your spider PERSONALITY as well as talent. Rod
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Rod!
Comment from zanya
This is such a fun read - what child would not enjoy this adorable poem and adult too? the tone is fun-filled - line 3 stanza 1 really sets the scene and such a super pic
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is such a fun read - what child would not enjoy this adorable poem and adult too? the tone is fun-filled - line 3 stanza 1 really sets the scene and such a super pic
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks much, Zanya!
Comment from roof35
You chose a cute picture to go with your cute poem. As much as I hate spiders, you entertained me. I think my grandkids would love this one. It is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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You chose a cute picture to go with your cute poem. As much as I hate spiders, you entertained me. I think my grandkids would love this one. It is very nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks much, roof!
Comment from Bill Schott
This spider poem, These Eight Legs of Mine, gives us a moment with a proud arachnid and his eight hoofers with which he is quire impressed.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This spider poem, These Eight Legs of Mine, gives us a moment with a proud arachnid and his eight hoofers with which he is quire impressed.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks much, Bill
Comment from Janilou
Super cute poem. I enjoyed reading it and can see children really enjoying it.
These eight legs of mine
Are talented, yes?
Bet you wish you could find
Such limbs to impress!
My favorite lines. LOL
All the best in the contest! A great entry.
Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Super cute poem. I enjoyed reading it and can see children really enjoying it.
These eight legs of mine
Are talented, yes?
Bet you wish you could find
Such limbs to impress!
My favorite lines. LOL
All the best in the contest! A great entry.
Jan
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks much, Janilou!
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought this was a fun piece to read and I think it will definitely appeal to children. I really liked the rhyme which I thought brought your poem to life. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I thought this was a fun piece to read and I think it will definitely appeal to children. I really liked the rhyme which I thought brought your poem to life. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks much, Jacob!
