These Eight Legs of Mine
A spidery children's poem for fun29 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha this is good for commercial :"These eight legs of mine
Are talented, yes?
Bet you wish you could find
Such limbs to impress!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Ha, ha, ha this is good for commercial :"These eight legs of mine
Are talented, yes?
Bet you wish you could find
Such limbs to impress!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from kahpot
Yes having eight legs has got to have some advantages, love the chosen artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Yes having eight legs has got to have some advantages, love the chosen artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your fun review!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Cindy Decker
I'm sorry I don't have six stars left to give you. Your poem will be loved by children and adults. You don't condescend to children, and the adults will enjoy the perfect rhyme you've created.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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I'm sorry I don't have six stars left to give you. Your poem will be loved by children and adults. You don't condescend to children, and the adults will enjoy the perfect rhyme you've created.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the wonderful review - you have my eight legs dancing all over again!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the super fit spider that makes the best of all eight of his legs. He dances like a pro and no one is able to beat him in any race.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A very well-written poem about the super fit spider that makes the best of all eight of his legs. He dances like a pro and no one is able to beat him in any race.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review - you have my eight legs dancing all over again!
Comment from Earl Corp
Very good entry into the Along Came A Spider contest. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and it entertained me. Cute graphic you chose to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Very good entry into the Along Came A Spider contest. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and it entertained me. Cute graphic you chose to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review - you have my eight legs dancing all over again!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nicely done entry for the prompt contest. It shows all the things a spider does with her legs. It is witty and works well as a child's poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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This is a nicely done entry for the prompt contest. It shows all the things a spider does with her legs. It is witty and works well as a child's poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review - you have my eight legs dancing all over again!
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Don't mention it.
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Comment from BHWatson
I really like this poem. I can hear me reading it in class to a group of children. It plays nicely with words that you can picture. I also like the way you repeated "these eight legs of mine", and moved the line down one each verse, until the very last. Clever. Good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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I really like this poem. I can hear me reading it in class to a group of children. It plays nicely with words that you can picture. I also like the way you repeated "these eight legs of mine", and moved the line down one each verse, until the very last. Clever. Good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Wow, BH!! You have certainly made my spider legs dance a jig and more in celebration here: thank you so much for your awesome review and those lovely stars!! I do hope this sends you a smile for a wonderful Wednesday wherever you are!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork
and the presentation is good.
-A well written poem that
children would really like.
-A very good repeating line
and fun examples about spiders.
-I like the opening verse a lot
about all of the shoes and not
asking it to choose!
-The rhymes are good, and
the poem flows really well.
-I like the dancing verse, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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-I love the artwork
and the presentation is good.
-A well written poem that
children would really like.
-A very good repeating line
and fun examples about spiders.
-I like the opening verse a lot
about all of the shoes and not
asking it to choose!
-The rhymes are good, and
the poem flows really well.
-I like the dancing verse, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for such an awesome review!
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You are very welcome; it was a very good poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write here and this spider is having some fun with his eight legs! You made them much less scary with your humorous write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A fun write here and this spider is having some fun with his eight legs! You made them much less scary with your humorous write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you for such an awesome review!
