What Every Woman Knows
a lighthearted entry in a fun topic contest9 total reviews
Comment from amada
Ah, the Black Widow Spider, tales have been told about her...I do remember. I loved this poem, very intense and tells deep stories.he lines about her voluptuous exterior and saving preys for her rivals. For sure, I met this black widow a couple of years ago...she goes after Davids as well.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Ah, the Black Widow Spider, tales have been told about her...I do remember. I loved this poem, very intense and tells deep stories.he lines about her voluptuous exterior and saving preys for her rivals. For sure, I met this black widow a couple of years ago...she goes after Davids as well.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you. Sorry about David.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh my God. this is so hilarious. I think this is an excellent entry for the contest -
The girls who've discovered that she's chocolate covered
Are legion. They sure have her number.
But what good's it do ya to say, "We see through ya,"
When she remains quite the cucumber.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Oh my God. this is so hilarious. I think this is an excellent entry for the contest -
The girls who've discovered that she's chocolate covered
Are legion. They sure have her number.
But what good's it do ya to say, "We see through ya,"
When she remains quite the cucumber.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Cool entry for the Along came a Spider... writing promo contest. Nice presentation and picture. The rhyme scheme is well done. I like the black widow twist.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Cool entry for the Along came a Spider... writing promo contest. Nice presentation and picture. The rhyme scheme is well done. I like the black widow twist.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I found this charming piece of poetry quite hilarious. It is a wonderful entry for the contest. The sentences have a nice lilt and the rhymes are clever. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I found this charming piece of poetry quite hilarious. It is a wonderful entry for the contest. The sentences have a nice lilt and the rhymes are clever. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much. It was fun to write.
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
This fantastic poem should be illustrated and made into a little book. What a clever way to tell the tale with the most lyrical verses. Actually read like a song. Funny and sophisticated all in one. Wonderful work. A winner. Give us more of your talent!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This fantastic poem should be illustrated and made into a little book. What a clever way to tell the tale with the most lyrical verses. Actually read like a song. Funny and sophisticated all in one. Wonderful work. A winner. Give us more of your talent!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for a fantastic review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, yeah - I was waiting for someone to 'snag' onto this aspect -- what a great offering for the contest with lots of outward emotions woven in here: well done!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, yeah - I was waiting for someone to 'snag' onto this aspect -- what a great offering for the contest with lots of outward emotions woven in here: well done!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from mermaids
This is a clever and creative poem
You have a strong steady beat and your spider poem has a modern feel to it. This is an excellent entry for the contest
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is a clever and creative poem
You have a strong steady beat and your spider poem has a modern feel to it. This is an excellent entry for the contest
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from roof35
This is a fun read and your illustration pairs well with your words--such a lovely, lacy web she spins. If there is one thing I hate almost as much as snakes, it is spiders, yet you entertained me. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is a fun read and your illustration pairs well with your words--such a lovely, lacy web she spins. If there is one thing I hate almost as much as snakes, it is spiders, yet you entertained me. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much.
