Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a cute poem entry for the Along came a Spider... writing prompt. It is an entertaining poem and should do well in the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thanks a lot for your review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Cool entry for the Along came a Spider... writing promo contest. Nice presentation and picture. The rhyme scheme is well done. underneath the seat...spiders meet... lol what a horrible thought, now I will have to check.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review.
Believe me, they do. Scared the heebegeebees outta me!!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Along came the spiders is very good
I like how you describe the most frighting spiders especially the Tralantula. No thank you I don't need any spiders underneath my toilet seat.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This poem is an excellent contest entry. It fits the subject matter nicely and the rhyme scheme is clever. The picture you chose works well with the poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I really like this poem about spiders that will appeal to all ages. Children think spiders LURK everywhere, why not under the toilet seat? And young adult readers will like the SCIENCE element showing how they weave a web and trap their prey. And your use of rhyme really lightens the tone. Rod

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your well written poem on spiders. UGH! I don't think a soul on this earth likes them. Yes, they do entice so many in their carefully spun web. So glad it's not me.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

I have to give you five stars for a poem well written--it is just that I hate the subject. They are just so creepy and they bite! Your picture, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. The best thing about spiders is they're easy to squash!!!

Comment from AJ McCall

Excellent

WOW. That's one really big spider. Imagine if the kids singing itsy-bitsy spider saw that on the cover of the song. The poem flowed well and was an easy read. But now I'll be looking under my toilet seat when I got to the restroom.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Look up the song "Redback on the toilet seat" if you want a laugh

reply by AJ McCall on 23-Jun-2020

You're welcome. I will. It sounds funny!

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Wonderful, Mystery Writer!
As an avid gardener, I know I should be a huge fan of spiders, but admittedly, they scare the heck out of me...even Charlotte!
Your verse is fun and creative!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review Dianne. I had to research my childhood when you mentioned Charlotte!!

reply by Mrs. KT on 23-Jun-2020

:)