Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

I'm so supportive of the true portesters. So saddened by those who will use this as an excuse to create chaos and despair. Well penned.
A very nice contest entry, the technical are correct (of course!), your rhyme is good and you've created a nice poem in just a few words. Well done!
Best of luck in the contest and many blessings,
Deb

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thank you for reading. I agree with you, I am with peaceful protest...I think that more will be accomplished in this way. :)

Comment from sherrygreywolf

Excellent

Powerful commentary on the current goings on around our poor country. You chose appropriate artwork that added accentuated the stark reality of the situation. Great job!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This follows all the rules and is rhymed well. You have a straight forward message in just a few words. The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thank you for this great review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

So very true.... not one darn thing 'peaceful' about destroying lives and property... :( :( Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls this evening! ;)

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020

Thank you for reading, it makes me mad what is happening in this world. I just had to express it. Thanks again.