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Money Tree

a house plant

14 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

Nice entry for the
Dying Houseplant writing prompt contest. Great presentation and picture. You followed the rules well.

I had a money tree for a long time, untill I moved. I don't talk to plants. Sounds like a good idea. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2020

Comment from Melodie Michelle
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I enjoyed reading your story and the cute and spiritual twist it took was very creative on your part;-)

Excellent entry for the writing prompt contest;-) Good luck!

Thank you so much for sharing;-)
God bless you;-)

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much Melodie for your wonderful review.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 30-Jun-2020
    ;-(
Comment from roof35
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This is a lovely tribute to God as well as the house plant. It is well written and you followed the contest rules. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words. This is nicely done.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from estory
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I thought this was an interesting story within the context of the contest. You did a good job bringing that money tree to life, and telling us that what is so important in all our relationships is feelings. Love. everyone wants and needs to be loved, and without that love, we wilt away. estory

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Amen to that:)
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
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This is a very entertaining read that held my attention throughout. My eyes and brain were eagerly pursuing every line. Perfect grammer and no typos. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much Bobby and Millie, for your awesome review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(housewarming is a compound word; (semicolon)THEY wither and die) This is a whimsical and touching story with an wise message. Best of luck in the contest. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much Liz, for the correction and the review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the way the plant started talking and what it had to say. Its message taught the woman a good lesson, too. You did a good job with your entry. Thanks for haring and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

I started to shade ( shed ) my leaves . . .

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020

Comment from Bichon
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This was definitely a unique entry into the contest. You have described the experience well and wrote about the dying houseplant. Wouldn't be bad if it did give some money!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Once she will feel better the leaves will come back and with it prosperity.
Comment from zanya
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A very interesting interpretation of the Dying Houseplant prompt - yes talking to our plants is supposed to be a good idea - thanks for sharing these sentiments

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for taking the time and review my silly story:)
Comment from sibhus
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A great little piece with a message that we can all take to heart, during these trying times. This makes for a wonderful entry for the contest. I also thought it was an inventive way to approach this challenge. Good luck.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2020
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review.