Waterway to Eternity
You have to believe that, in the end, it'll all be worth it42 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our journey is sometimes bumpy and life can hurt but the journey is worth it as love can soothe and grip us with a passion that never leaves our hearts, I enjoyed your words here Yvette, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Our journey is sometimes bumpy and life can hurt but the journey is worth it as love can soothe and grip us with a passion that never leaves our hearts, I enjoyed your words here Yvette, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Dolly -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This four line poem is sprinkled liberally with 's' alliteration in Streams, soothe, scabrous, sustaining and sea. It also has some 't' alliteration in tears, teardrops. Gorgeous art choice. It hints that time and tears are rather necessary to help release feelings about life events but that love will sustain anyone through it all.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This four line poem is sprinkled liberally with 's' alliteration in Streams, soothe, scabrous, sustaining and sea. It also has some 't' alliteration in tears, teardrops. Gorgeous art choice. It hints that time and tears are rather necessary to help release feelings about life events but that love will sustain anyone through it all.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, you know how to make me smile, Crystie!! ; :) Thanx so much for your review on this short one, my lady -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four-line poem about the streams of time and teardrops in our lives from pain and heartaches flow away into the sea until we find the love of our heart.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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A very well-written four-line poem about the streams of time and teardrops in our lives from pain and heartaches flow away into the sea until we find the love of our heart.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Sandra -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A beautiful poem. I love the way it tells of hope's, love's, and time's healing powers. It gives a feeling that despite all the struggle and pain, there is still something good to look forward to.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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A beautiful poem. I love the way it tells of hope's, love's, and time's healing powers. It gives a feeling that despite all the struggle and pain, there is still something good to look forward to.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Imaginos -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Beautifully written entry into the Four Lone Poem contest. Meets the syllable requirements and the alliteration is an extra treat. I especially liked the first two lines - "Streams of time and teardrops" - very nice!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Beautifully written entry into the Four Lone Poem contest. Meets the syllable requirements and the alliteration is an extra treat. I especially liked the first two lines - "Streams of time and teardrops" - very nice!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Sherry -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from lancellot
Vary nice. If rain were tear drops and e rivers and streams ran them back to the sea. I can see how nature would be that way. It makes the entire planet seem like a living person
Good work.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Vary nice. If rain were tear drops and e rivers and streams ran them back to the sea. I can see how nature would be that way. It makes the entire planet seem like a living person
Good work.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for your review, lancellot - good to hear from you over here!! ;) Be sure to drop in again sometimes and take care out there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You got a winner in this poem: "
Streams
of time and teardrops
soothe life's scabrous pains
'til the heart finds Love's sustaining sea"
Beautiful metaphors and personifications - streams of time, teardrops, what a refreshing image. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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You got a winner in this poem: "
Streams
of time and teardrops
soothe life's scabrous pains
'til the heart finds Love's sustaining sea"
Beautiful metaphors and personifications - streams of time, teardrops, what a refreshing image. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, you know how to make me smile, Iza!! ; :) Thanx so much for your review on this short one, my lady -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your choice of metaphors is supreme. The flow of life takes us through many rocks and valleys that have pathways that will take us back up. I love the imagery your words create along with the art.
:)Ralf
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Your choice of metaphors is supreme. The flow of life takes us through many rocks and valleys that have pathways that will take us back up. I love the imagery your words create along with the art.
:)Ralf
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, you know how to make me smile, Ralf!! ; :) Thanx so much for your review on this short one, my lady -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the few syllables the prompt allows to convey a powerful message about time, pain, and healing. Effective
use of symbols
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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You have made excellent use of the few syllables the prompt allows to convey a powerful message about time, pain, and healing. Effective
use of symbols
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Janice -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Such an elegant poem! Yes, you did a super job capturing that sense of how life's hardships are soothed and "sustained" by Love. I think this is another win for you!! Beautiful presentation, too!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Such an elegant poem! Yes, you did a super job capturing that sense of how life's hardships are soothed and "sustained" by Love. I think this is another win for you!! Beautiful presentation, too!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Helen -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
