A Day in the Life
We don't always find inspiration when (or where) we think we16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Writers do not know what, why and where they get writer's block and where from muse will generate, nothing is probable, muse is unexpected; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Writers do not know what, why and where they get writer's block and where from muse will generate, nothing is probable, muse is unexpected; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Alcreator, for reading and reviewing! I think we're all In the same boat with this life vs. writing thing. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Deb. I enjoyed reading it. The lines/words flowed smoothly down the page. The imagery was outstanding. I could see everything your mentioned. I like the part mear the end where you take your sweet ice tea to the porch, look at stars, find God, and inspiration. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
3rd verse from the bottom. . .conversaitons--->conversations
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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This is a great contest entry, Deb. I enjoyed reading it. The lines/words flowed smoothly down the page. The imagery was outstanding. I could see everything your mentioned. I like the part mear the end where you take your sweet ice tea to the porch, look at stars, find God, and inspiration. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
3rd verse from the bottom. . .conversaitons--->conversations
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Ah, that itchy trigger finger -- always puts at least one letter out of place! I thought I got them all, but I do appreciate your sharp eye and the catch. :)
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I take a seat.
I will wait on her and
we will have the magical conversaitons
all writers have with their other self.
Hi Deb, lovely entry for the contest, we always struggle with our inspiration Goddess. Just a small correction - conversaitons should be conversation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I take a seat.
I will wait on her and
we will have the magical conversaitons
all writers have with their other self.
Hi Deb, lovely entry for the contest, we always struggle with our inspiration Goddess. Just a small correction - conversaitons should be conversation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Ah, that itchy trigger finger -- always puts at least one letter out of place! I thought I got them all, but I do appreciate your sharp eye and the catch. :)
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Your poem is in the image of a pen. Did you realize that? This is poem that "struggles" with you throughout the day, fashioning itself regardless of the interruptions. Shows how the ordinary everydayness is poetry. You live within a poem - simple as that! Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Your poem is in the image of a pen. Did you realize that? This is poem that "struggles" with you throughout the day, fashioning itself regardless of the interruptions. Shows how the ordinary everydayness is poetry. You live within a poem - simple as that! Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Hi, Margaret. I wish I was clever enough to say that I planned the pen, but ? Wowza! It IS a pen! lol.
Thank you, sweet friend. YOur reviews always mean a lot to me.
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
Comment from lyenochka
Such a great description of real life as a writer with all of the typical interruptions! And I love that when you really get down to writing, you feel that connection to the Lord!
Typos:
"I'm back at the comuter," (computer)
"magical conversaitons" (conversations)
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Such a great description of real life as a writer with all of the typical interruptions! And I love that when you really get down to writing, you feel that connection to the Lord!
Typos:
"I'm back at the comuter," (computer)
"magical conversaitons" (conversations)
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Ah, that itchy trigger finger -- always puts at least one letter out of place! I thought I got them all, but I do appreciate your sharp eye and the catch. :)
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
Comment from roof35
I liked this. This kind of thing happens at my house, too. I especially like the way you ended it--inspiring. You wrote it with humor and wrote it well. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I liked this. This kind of thing happens at my house, too. I especially like the way you ended it--inspiring. You wrote it with humor and wrote it well. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much. If we don't have humor, nothing quite works, does it. I appreciate your review and kind words. :)
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
