A Day in the Life
We don't always find inspiration when (or where) we think we16 total reviews
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Love this glimpse into your day and writing life. So true to everyday happenings. And the ending is totally unexpected from the words that come before - I could actually feel you winding down and relaxing in the calm, quiet night. Beautiful work.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Love this glimpse into your day and writing life. So true to everyday happenings. And the ending is totally unexpected from the words that come before - I could actually feel you winding down and relaxing in the calm, quiet night. Beautiful work.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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I know your life is much crazier, so I tip my hat to you ? if I still wore hats. Remember when I wore them all the time? High school, maybe... anyhow, THANK you. :)
Love ya'
Deb
Comment from BeasPeas
A fine free verse poem that most of us are able to relate to. I think you've expressed it well and, yes, the poem does appear to be in the shape of a pen. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A fine free verse poem that most of us are able to relate to. I think you've expressed it well and, yes, the poem does appear to be in the shape of a pen. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanks Marilyn. I always appreciate your reading and reviewing my work! :)
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wow! This is lovely! I can imagine. How difficult it is to run a family and still finish up with your daily to-do-lists. This is brilliant!
More grace.
My very best wishes in the contest. Cheers!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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Wow! This is lovely! I can imagine. How difficult it is to run a family and still finish up with your daily to-do-lists. This is brilliant!
More grace.
My very best wishes in the contest. Cheers!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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It couldn't be any more difficult than doing what you do every day, dear friend!
I'll TAKE that grace and pass it back to you. :)
Blessings, sir
Deb
Comment from Ulla
Hi Debby, your free verse poem does actually resembles a pen. What a clever observation. I loved your poem and can totally identify with chaos and you so desperately wanting to be creative, which you obviously manage to find. I loved it. Good luck in the contest. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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Hi Debby, your free verse poem does actually resembles a pen. What a clever observation. I loved your poem and can totally identify with chaos and you so desperately wanting to be creative, which you obviously manage to find. I loved it. Good luck in the contest. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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You're very kind, as always!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from Pearl Edwards
What started out as trying to urge the inspiration ended up with the little life stuff invading and then settling in with your muse to the peacefulness of night. A lovely free verse Deb where your thoughts flow. Cheers valda
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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What started out as trying to urge the inspiration ended up with the little life stuff invading and then settling in with your muse to the peacefulness of night. A lovely free verse Deb where your thoughts flow. Cheers valda
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Valda! I was pretty nervous about starting this, but then it became more fun as I went along. :)
Thanks and blessings,
Deb
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your free-verse poem is creatively-conceived, vividly descriptive of the distractions--however special and welcome they may be--the poet encounters while trying to create. Nice touch of humor
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Your free-verse poem is creatively-conceived, vividly descriptive of the distractions--however special and welcome they may be--the poet encounters while trying to create. Nice touch of humor
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Janice! Humor is the way to deal with most of life, so why not distractions, too. :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written Free Verse poem you have penned for the contest about a day in your life. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the beautiful art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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This is a very nice and well written Free Verse poem you have penned for the contest about a day in your life. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the beautiful art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Teri! YOu be blessed, too! I appreciate your review and kindness. :)
Deb
Comment from Puzzle
Omg this is the best. Because this is real life. lol. i love it. you did an excellent job with this. it's beautifully written, true and i love the layout you chose for it! It's awesome!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Omg this is the best. Because this is real life. lol. i love it. you did an excellent job with this. it's beautifully written, true and i love the layout you chose for it! It's awesome!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Hi Dana! I thought you might get a kick out of this! Not sure about kittens at your house, and we'd have to replace 'Grandmomma' with 'Mommy', but I bet the rest is spot on. lol I'm blown away and onored by the six stars. Thank yu!
Holler at me later if you'd like. Going up to church to clean for a hwile this morning. Yay. My favorite thing in life besides cleaning the cat litter box. lol
Blessings to Y'all,
Deb
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I'm sure many writers can relate to this, it seems that whenever I sit down to write there are always so many distractions. I thought this was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I'm sure many writers can relate to this, it seems that whenever I sit down to write there are always so many distractions. I thought this was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing! I think we're all In the same boat with this life vs. writing thing. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I too find it difficult to sit down during the daytime and write. My creative juices can only flow when everyone is in bed, and I am finally alone.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I too find it difficult to sit down during the daytime and write. My creative juices can only flow when everyone is in bed, and I am finally alone.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing! I think we're all In the same boat with this life vs. writing thing. :) I quite often really get my work here done between 10 and 2AM. I agree -- everyone in bed is the solution, but then that darned sun rises SO early! :)
Blessings, my friend,
Deb
Be blessed,
Deb
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Ha ha. So true!
