Silent Morning
A cold winter morning in the midwest.2 total reviews
Comment from Flyaway1
An excellent 2-5-2.
With just With just a few words, you have told a lovely tale.
It made me feel a little
melancholy. The cold of winter and the silence of what is waiting to grow during this season.
It could also be a good metaphor for life, where in our lives there are seasons necessary reflection and quiet. These times of silence can bring great growth in our life- an abundant harvest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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An excellent 2-5-2.
With just With just a few words, you have told a lovely tale.
It made me feel a little
melancholy. The cold of winter and the silence of what is waiting to grow during this season.
It could also be a good metaphor for life, where in our lives there are seasons necessary reflection and quiet. These times of silence can bring great growth in our life- an abundant harvest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much for the read and review. Yes, re: the metaphor. I want to believe I still am in the autumn of mine.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a beautiful scene you've presented! The poem is a tiny one but fills the imagination with sights and senses - the chill of the cold and the idea of the white scene. I think this is a great presentation. The image adds the icing! Good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a beautiful scene you've presented! The poem is a tiny one but fills the imagination with sights and senses - the chill of the cold and the idea of the white scene. I think this is a great presentation. The image adds the icing! Good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much for the read and review. Glad you like the presentation.
