Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Exceptional

Love this picture my friend, so much
thinking went into this write i could tell,
great job as always you are a gifted man in
writing love reading your work

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020

And you're my dearest fanstory friend.
And I love you so much Abby!
Ricky

reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 19-Jun-2020

thank you for caring we may have never met in person but I believe we have so much in common with all my love
Abby

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Poor

The Korean war didn't start till 1950. Also, there are some grammatical errors. The cold war and Korean War were not the same thing either. Not even fought with the same countries. I think with some editing, this could work out as a good story, though.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020

Thanks but no thanks
I did not researcher or Google any of the dates on the Korean war.
But it is called the Cold war so you're wrong right there.
I don't severely take away from the ratings of a person's work just because of an error.
This is based on Dad's life.
You missed the point the mermaid was added to give the story presence.
Based on my book of beautiful poetry about the ocean.
I'm sure if you read some of the other chapters you won't read them poorly.
also the person that this was written for who calls herself mermaid gave it a six star review.
AJ McCall just gave it five stars and said it was amazing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"

Comment from AJ McCall

Excellent

The image is 'mesmerizing'. It definitely captures the beauty of these fantasy creatures. I always wonder where exactly the whole mermaid stories originally started. Nice work!

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020

Thanks,
Maybe one day We can realize this beauty?
Ricky

reply by AJ McCall on 18-Jun-2020

You're welcome. And yes.