Hindsight
2-5-2 poem entry8 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have written an excellent description of the illustration. It is a full story in your nine syllables, that everyone can envisage exactly what happened and why. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
You have written an excellent description of the illustration. It is a full story in your nine syllables, that everyone can envisage exactly what happened and why. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece. Always appreciate feedback.
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Everyone seems to be in love today - haha. Good entry for this 2-5-2 contest. Meets the syllable and line requirements. Nice job. Hope you are having a great week.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
Everyone seems to be in love today - haha. Good entry for this 2-5-2 contest. Meets the syllable and line requirements. Nice job. Hope you are having a great week.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Wow! Author, your presentation of colors and art accommodated your words so brilliantly. The colors scheme chosen just makes the theme of love comes to life with excitement. And the few words made a big statement for your declaration of Love to your lover and how it made you feel. Great work.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
Wow! Author, your presentation of colors and art accommodated your words so brilliantly. The colors scheme chosen just makes the theme of love comes to life with excitement. And the few words made a big statement for your declaration of Love to your lover and how it made you feel. Great work.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed these sentiments. Appreciate your dropping by.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the love of a loved one comforts us and give us clarity of where our life is going to. True live is the one thing we all need badly.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about the love of a loved one comforts us and give us clarity of where our life is going to. True live is the one thing we all need badly.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed these sentiments. Appreciate your dropping by.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love sometimes opens our eyes as we see things from another's perspective and two minds can often nurture both hearts into heightened love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
Love sometimes opens our eyes as we see things from another's perspective and two minds can often nurture both hearts into heightened love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed these sentiments. Appreciate your dropping by.
Comment from QC Poet
2-5-2 poems as those of limited syllable counts are tricky. Definition of the words is most important to message. This is great work of the combining of both. Best of Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
2-5-2 poems as those of limited syllable counts are tricky. Definition of the words is most important to message. This is great work of the combining of both. Best of Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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So glad you enjoyed these sentiments. Appreciate your dropping by.
Comment from joycetreasures
Top of the day to you. I pray you are doing well.
Nicely done this 2-5-2 poem with the unititle, "Defined by Love." The message is lovely. Your love gave life and that life was charity, which is love. And, that defined that love. Nicely and cleverly written. Well-done. Thanks.
Happy writing:-) Poem requirements met. Beautiful imagery of the lovely flowers. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
Top of the day to you. I pray you are doing well.
Nicely done this 2-5-2 poem with the unititle, "Defined by Love." The message is lovely. Your love gave life and that life was charity, which is love. And, that defined that love. Nicely and cleverly written. Well-done. Thanks.
Happy writing:-) Poem requirements met. Beautiful imagery of the lovely flowers. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
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You are so welcome.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I feel grace and grateful after reading this. This shows the reader that love can make a difference in a person's life.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
I feel grace and grateful after reading this. This shows the reader that love can make a difference in a person's life.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments!