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Repel

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Comment from sherrygreywolf
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Meets all the requirements for the Humorous 5-7-5. I've had ex-relationships that made me feel this way, too - LOL. Hope you are having a great week.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This humorous 5-7-5, Repel, has the right set up and shows someone exercising a demon that keeps getting closer but doesn't take hints very well.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Ulla
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Yeah, right, I got that one all right. Do you think you can catch up with him? hehe. Great little 5-7-5 poem. Great entry into the contest. I liked it. Good luck. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem about pretending to do exercise when there is someone of the opposite sex nearby to see the well-trained body and firm muscle structure.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Oh my, a entertaining poem! This is a good amusing entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 contest. This entry should do well. Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your wonderful review.
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    You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha watching people exercise certainly motivates us and I go running everyday to achieve my steps and it always sets me up for the days challenges, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Repel

Hello my friend

Good syllable count and connection between lines. The poem flows well. It's a fine entry for the
Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good luck

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Lovely way of avoiding the unpleasant encounter by escaping in... Exercise.Yup, I got to jogging out. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from oliver818
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This made me laugh. I never have the problem of wanting to do exercise when I see other do it, I have the opposite problem of wanting to eat and drink
When others do that. But I like the poem, you structured it well
And it works well. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from rspoet
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Excellent humorous poem for the 5-7-5 contest.
Some people try to slip away, other run away,
some never take the hint.
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020

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    Thank you for your great review.