Oh No! Oh NO! AHCHOO!
Ok - so you had to be there.11 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh, no, oh, NO! Ahchoo is right! lol. You did make me laugh and I'm still grinning. If this is true (?), that was one expensive night, or so I've been told. :)
Either way, great humor here. Follows guidelines and certainly is funny!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Oh, no, oh, NO! Ahchoo is right! lol. You did make me laugh and I'm still grinning. If this is true (?), that was one expensive night, or so I've been told. :)
Either way, great humor here. Follows guidelines and certainly is funny!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanx, Sis.
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Oh no! Oh no! Ah how!, has the right set up and gives the worst case scenario for having to sneeze. I guess your surgeon with a scalpel comes close.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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This humorous 5-7-5, Oh no! Oh no! Ah how!, has the right set up and gives the worst case scenario for having to sneeze. I guess your surgeon with a scalpel comes close.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem, Bill. And yes - having your surgeon sneeze would be worse - LOL!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Oh my, a entertaining poem! This is a good amusing entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 contest. This entry should do well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Oh my, a entertaining poem! This is a good amusing entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 contest. This entry should do well. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much, Rebecca, for taking the time to read and comment on my little poem. Hope the week is treating you well.
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Oh, it is! Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Good syllable count and connection between lines. Great entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny...I know what you mean. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
Good syllable count and connection between lines. Great entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny...I know what you mean. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much Gypsy Blue Rose for taking the time to read and review my little poem. It was a fun write. Hope you're having a great week.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It can happen anytime, anywhere, sometime it is not easy to control; evident is the outcome; well said, well done; enjoyed the humour read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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It can happen anytime, anywhere, sometime it is not easy to control; evident is the outcome; well said, well done; enjoyed the humour read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my little attempt at a 5-7-5 humor piece.
Comment from oliver818
Haha I don't condone drug use but this would be a very funny scene to witness. It reminds me of crocodile Dundee when he puts the coke in the hot water for the guy to sniff. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Haha I don't condone drug use but this would be a very funny scene to witness. It reminds me of crocodile Dundee when he puts the coke in the hot water for the guy to sniff. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my little ditty. This is one of those different times/different rhymes type of situations.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the humorous poem contest.
Yes, you had to be there, but I'm glad I wasn't.
Maybe that's why the straw man in Oz had no brains.
Between poppies and powder, there was little left.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the humorous poem contest.
Yes, you had to be there, but I'm glad I wasn't.
Maybe that's why the straw man in Oz had no brains.
Between poppies and powder, there was little left.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Robert - thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my little poem. Your comments about the straw man made me laugh, but you are probably right. Hope your week is treating you well.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh dear -- all that money just 'in the wind' now... :) :) A fun offering for the 5-7-5 writing prompt today - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Oh dear -- all that money just 'in the wind' now... :) :) A fun offering for the 5-7-5 writing prompt today - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my 5-7-5 piece. And I loved your comment about it. Hope you are doing well this week.
Comment from jaded831
Very funny, you did your job, you made me laugh. I could feel the disappointment the expected partier felt after the sneeze. The picture is perfect. Your entire package gets thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Very funny, you did your job, you made me laugh. I could feel the disappointment the expected partier felt after the sneeze. The picture is perfect. Your entire package gets thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Glad I could give you a laugh - that's what this one was all about. Hope your week is going well and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is actually very funny. A really clever and creative little poem. The picture is perfect, but it's the title that peaked my interest. This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 contest and I wish you the best of luck in that contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This is actually very funny. A really clever and creative little poem. The picture is perfect, but it's the title that peaked my interest. This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 contest and I wish you the best of luck in that contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my 5-7-5 humor piece. I figured that many would read that and think that it was about Covid and then be surprised/a bit shocked by the actual content. Don't know if it worked or not, but I do what I can - haha. Again - thanks for your time and comments.
