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Just Born

Munchkin ( smile )

6 total reviews 
Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

CIAO TEMPESTE: This posting is a masterpiece. To me...it is extremely humorous. Why? Well...a close friend of mine told me that she never held a baby in her arms in her life. That made me sad. Ha ha ha ha...thanx Tempest. Now I don't have to be sad any more. Ciao, best friend. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. Congrats on the victory. You deserve the best... R.J.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    So glad to see you are back and posting ..

    it?s true I have never held a baby in my arms but that doesn?t mean I can?t write a humorous poem about them! ( biggrin)

    Thanks for your everlasting support!

    Rest up my friend!
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! Enjoyed the "womb service" pun and yes, for some babies - birth really is a reason for complaint. I think my youngest felt "evicted" too early due to a scheduled C-section. She was not happy about it at all.
Congratulations on the win!!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    I have no children so I can only imagine the ordeal you both went through.

    If you have time please check out my front page where the winning ribbon appears for this contest .. I left a link to copy and paste .. I think you will enjoy the song and the dancing ..

    Keep safe !!!
Comment from Manh C Dang
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Congratulations on this win! So good and so well-deserved! My wife and I have triplets. 23 years ago they were all evicted! and we're still trying to evict them from our house :-)

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020
    That made me laugh !!

    I imagine they are boys ...

    ..I don?t have children and never married ..

    I?m a loner by nature ..cats and dogs are my family ( biggrin)

    PS: talking about children ....If you check my front page where the red ribbon appears for this contest , I left a copy and paste internet link .. it?s a song I think you will enjoy.

    Meep safe!!
reply by Manh C Dang on 21-Jun-2020
    I love the video of children dancing! I do a lot of mission works in Kenya and the Dominican Republic and have seen a lot of children like that - living in poverty but having so much joy! Thank you for posting the video! God bless!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Ciao Dang!

    a warm hearty thank you for all the work and help you provide these needed children.

    They are dying like flies and the world is more interested in people like the Kardeshians ( sorry I don t know how to spell correctly and honestly I don?t care about their shallow lives)

    At least in the 80s/90s concerts were organised to raise awareness and money.

    I m so glad you enjoyed the video .. I play it a couple of times a day...it?s an energy booster

    Keep safe !

reply by Manh C Dang on 23-Jun-2020
    Yes,
    I agree that much of the world seems more interested in celebrities than those suffering every day. Thank you for your beautiful heart!
Comment from sherrygreywolf
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Wonderful! Funny, sweet and meets the requirements for the Humorous 5-7-5 contest. Priceless entry make me smile. Have a great week and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020


    Thank you for the kind review .. glad you liked the read( smile)

    Hope you have a peaceful weekend

    Keep safe !!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is humorous. Good job with the syllable count per line. The picture and your words match nicely. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Glad my entry made you laugh ...we need a bit of humour with all the madness that is going on in the world.

    Keep safe!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, I loved this 5-7-5, a clever play on words and I reckon this is a winner for the contest, life gets harder from now on! He he he, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
    Hopefully others will enjoy my entry as much as you did..

    Thank you for the kind response ..

    Take care !!