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Comment from papa55mike
Hi, Ricky. It's amazing how our lives ride the waves of love. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! I wish I had a six.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Hi, Ricky. It's amazing how our lives ride the waves of love. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! I wish I had a six.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks Papa.
Any sixes run out to quick also.
Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This piece does indeed convey the message of love lost and yet the ability to remember and yet sink into total remiss at the thought . Nicely done, i would go back and remove the computer added marks.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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This piece does indeed convey the message of love lost and yet the ability to remember and yet sink into total remiss at the thought . Nicely done, i would go back and remove the computer added marks.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks Barbara.
I had a lot of fun working with this one.
Ricky