One Blue Rose
Ekphrastic26 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
How despicable. Such a sad way to end a relationship. Knowing that you have been deceived is very hurtful, but to be deceived and deserted is even worse. Your emotion is front and center in this well crafted poem.
Ralf
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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How despicable. Such a sad way to end a relationship. Knowing that you have been deceived is very hurtful, but to be deceived and deserted is even worse. Your emotion is front and center in this well crafted poem.
Ralf
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Ralf,
Thank you kindly for your review and comments they are greatly appreciated. Keep safe and stay well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from royowen
I loved this marvellous post, that depicts what would have been a broken, but the author will overcome by being what those that have a positive outlook. Written in articulate pentameter and a super smooth narrative and aabb and immaculate rhyming, well done, Great write, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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I loved this marvellous post, that depicts what would have been a broken, but the author will overcome by being what those that have a positive outlook. Written in articulate pentameter and a super smooth narrative and aabb and immaculate rhyming, well done, Great write, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Roy.
I am glad you enjoyed this post. I stepped out of my comfort zone and wasn't sure how this poem would be received. Thanks so much for your positive feedback.
Blessings...Portia
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You did well
Comment from harmony13
The poem was sad, descriptive, well expressed and creative. I liked
the strength of this author's words in spite of the pain conveyed
throughout this poem. The poem flows and connects. The artworks sets the theme so well. I hope you are doing well....
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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The poem was sad, descriptive, well expressed and creative. I liked
the strength of this author's words in spite of the pain conveyed
throughout this poem. The poem flows and connects. The artworks sets the theme so well. I hope you are doing well....
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Hello Harmony,
I pray you are doing well.
Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from ameen786
A picture perfect poem with vivid imagery and great message of courage/determination; excellent rhymes and superb flow; thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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A picture perfect poem with vivid imagery and great message of courage/determination; excellent rhymes and superb flow; thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Ameen,
Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from TPAC
You made my list, finding a delighting experience, detailing vivid views, captivating statements defining occurrences making me part of its sequence, believing as if they applied to myself. Super conveyance in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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You made my list, finding a delighting experience, detailing vivid views, captivating statements defining occurrences making me part of its sequence, believing as if they applied to myself. Super conveyance in my given opinion.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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TPAC,
Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Choose a Color writing prompt contest. A great topic. The poem is very well written. Good luck in the contest!
I love blue roses, as you may guest. LoL
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Choose a Color writing prompt contest. A great topic. The poem is very well written. Good luck in the contest!
I love blue roses, as you may guest. LoL
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, comments and best wishes.
Blessings
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a lover that s unfaithful that can hurt a heart but when you stay above their level and not hate them for what they did to you. You will be the winner.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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A very well-written poem about a lover that s unfaithful that can hurt a heart but when you stay above their level and not hate them for what they did to you. You will be the winner.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a skillfully written and vividly descriptive poem, conveying a powerful message of deception, cruelty, heartbreak, and determination to recover. Blue rose--interesting choice, nonexistent in the natural world.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This is a skillfully written and vividly descriptive poem, conveying a powerful message of deception, cruelty, heartbreak, and determination to recover. Blue rose--interesting choice, nonexistent in the natural world.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings
Comment from Patty Palmer
I totally enjoyed your poem. The rhythm and rhyme are perfect! It gives the poem easy reading as it just moves right along. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I totally enjoyed your poem. The rhythm and rhyme are perfect! It gives the poem easy reading as it just moves right along. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, comments and best wishes.
Blessings
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sad words of betrayal here, well rhymed and delivered with a melancholy theme, the blue rose representing a parting of the ways here, we are worthy of better treatment than this, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Sad words of betrayal here, well rhymed and delivered with a melancholy theme, the blue rose representing a parting of the ways here, we are worthy of better treatment than this, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments.
Blessings
