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Some times you need to check things twice.
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Comment from
Iza Deleanu
Humorous indeed, and hard to think about the unexpected: "Stage Presentation -
Felt air...oops, my fly is down.
Standing Ovation!"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
Thank you Iza for taking the time to read one of my posts and for the very nice review.
Everyone laughs except the victim.
Thanks again,
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Comment from
Janice Canerdy
LOL! You really have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this piece that elicits a "Been there, done that" from me. For me, it was walking down the hall at CHURCH with my dress tucked in my panty hose. I too noticed a rush of air where I shouldn't have been feeling a breeze!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
Now that is funny...you should enter that in the contest. Thank you Janice for reading one of my posts and for the very nice review.
I can remember the first time I had to make a presentation...after that I enjoyed doing that, but remembered to check my fly twice. lol
Thanks again,
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