Drama
a 100 word story17 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This was really well done. Wish I had six stars left to give you. This a really unique way to write "the first kiss between strangers." I absolutely loved it.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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This was really well done. Wish I had six stars left to give you. This a really unique way to write "the first kiss between strangers." I absolutely loved it.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Roof
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This was well constructed with the 100 word limit. I've tried to write one. It is extremely difficult. You have a good lead to draw the reader in with your detailed setting readying for the plot ending. Your allusions add to the tone of the story.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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This was well constructed with the 100 word limit. I've tried to write one. It is extremely difficult. You have a good lead to draw the reader in with your detailed setting readying for the plot ending. Your allusions add to the tone of the story.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Liz.
Comment from AJ McCall
Wow, wasn't expecting that. Very interesting though. I love that last quote by Chris and the 'immortal' one was a perfect add-on to the story. Loved it!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Wow, wasn't expecting that. Very interesting though. I love that last quote by Chris and the 'immortal' one was a perfect add-on to the story. Loved it!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you, AJ
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You're welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Interesting entry for the
100 Word Dash writing prompt contest. You incorporated the first kiss into your flash fiction. Good job with the word count. It's hard to write flash fiction. You did well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Interesting entry for the
100 Word Dash writing prompt contest. You incorporated the first kiss into your flash fiction. Good job with the word count. It's hard to write flash fiction. You did well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This was a cute story! It would be surprising for the new kid in school to get a kiss from one of the actresses. I like how without skipping a beat he yelled, "Look Ma! Top a da woyld!" Good luck with the contesr!
Patty
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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This was a cute story! It would be surprising for the new kid in school to get a kiss from one of the actresses. I like how without skipping a beat he yelled, "Look Ma! Top a da woyld!" Good luck with the contesr!
Patty
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Patty
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good strong entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt. It should do very well in the contest. I wish you the very best of luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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This is a good strong entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt. It should do very well in the contest. I wish you the very best of luck.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2020
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Thank you, thaities.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You handled the prompt well. Your quoted lines add great interest to your little story. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You handled the prompt well. Your quoted lines add great interest to your little story. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a very clever little piece. the quotes are inserted iin a nice and workable frame. Good fun and a nice little write.
All the best come the judging
GMG
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Hi there,
This is a very clever little piece. the quotes are inserted iin a nice and workable frame. Good fun and a nice little write.
All the best come the judging
GMG
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Thank you, G.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about drama class that often bring some surprises to the student and the lecturers and it makes the practices a binding exercise.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about drama class that often bring some surprises to the student and the lecturers and it makes the practices a binding exercise.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Bichon
Your story was short, but enjoyable! You did a great job of creating the scenario in only one hundred words. You captured the high school aspect well also. Great work.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Your story was short, but enjoyable! You did a great job of creating the scenario in only one hundred words. You captured the high school aspect well also. Great work.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Bichon