Ode to the Finch
A Rhyming Dedication to those Warblers28 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Hi Earl excellent rhyming in this 5-7-5. For a first one, you did remarkably well and I enjoyed it. It was recognized but deserved more, I suspect. You have come a long way though, quite honestly, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Hi Earl excellent rhyming in this 5-7-5. For a first one, you did remarkably well and I enjoyed it. It was recognized but deserved more, I suspect. You have come a long way though, quite honestly, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Bob. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good entry for this competition. I like the clinch and finch rhyme, it works very well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good entry for this competition. I like the clinch and finch rhyme, it works very well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I appreciate you reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Yes, it is a 5-7-5. And yes, it is about a real bird species. And yes, I like it.
Finches are lively little birds, I have a whole lot of them twittering about in my big mother-like oak, where hundreds of different feathered friends have constructed their nests, and are brooding out their eggs. Some have their offspring already fixed for the first flying lessons.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Yes, it is a 5-7-5. And yes, it is about a real bird species. And yes, I like it.
Finches are lively little birds, I have a whole lot of them twittering about in my big mother-like oak, where hundreds of different feathered friends have constructed their nests, and are brooding out their eggs. Some have their offspring already fixed for the first flying lessons.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
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Welcome!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a pretty great first try at a 5/7/5 poem. It is quite masterful. I like the finch too. The photo that you chose is really cute and goes well with your poem. Keep writing these 5/7/5 poems. You're pretty good at them. Hugs. -January L.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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This is a pretty great first try at a 5/7/5 poem. It is quite masterful. I like the finch too. The photo that you chose is really cute and goes well with your poem. Keep writing these 5/7/5 poems. You're pretty good at them. Hugs. -January L.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks January, I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your favorite bird in this 5-7-5. I enjoyed your mono-verse rhyme and parallel picture selection. Best wishes in the contest and with your bird friends- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thank you for sharing your favorite bird in this 5-7-5. I enjoyed your mono-verse rhyme and parallel picture selection. Best wishes in the contest and with your bird friends- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanks Joan. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a cute little poem. I love finches as well. Thanks a lot for sharing this poe with us. I think this one should do well in the contest. Not sure when that is finished, though.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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This is a cute little poem. I love finches as well. Thanks a lot for sharing this poe with us. I think this one should do well in the contest. Not sure when that is finished, though.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I took second! Thanks for taking the time to look at this poem. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Nicely done! The finch is such an adorable bird, I once had two bright blue ones that I kept at home and they always seemed to be happy and content, as well as being so beautiful to look at every day. You have created the perfect entry for the 5-7-5 contest. The rhyming couldn't be better and in such a short piece you have conveyed the joy that you derive from the Finch. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Nicely done! The finch is such an adorable bird, I once had two bright blue ones that I kept at home and they always seemed to be happy and content, as well as being so beautiful to look at every day. You have created the perfect entry for the 5-7-5 contest. The rhyming couldn't be better and in such a short piece you have conveyed the joy that you derive from the Finch. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to look at this poem. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I enjoyed reading this piece. I feel the same way about the robin over here in Britain, it has and I think it will always be my favourite bird. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed reading this piece. I feel the same way about the robin over here in Britain, it has and I think it will always be my favourite bird. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to look at this poem. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello, Top of the day to you,
I like your 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird poem. However, you chose to write about the Finch. You met the poem's requirement. Also, I like the beautiful picture of the brown and black finch. I didn't know the finch are used as pet birds today. I had a parakeet at one time in my life. I like your three lines which rhymes beautifully in your poem. Your poem shares, it's an easy task to have a finch, and of course it stole your heart. Too cool. Well-penned. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Hello, Top of the day to you,
I like your 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird poem. However, you chose to write about the Finch. You met the poem's requirement. Also, I like the beautiful picture of the brown and black finch. I didn't know the finch are used as pet birds today. I had a parakeet at one time in my life. I like your three lines which rhymes beautifully in your poem. Your poem shares, it's an easy task to have a finch, and of course it stole your heart. Too cool. Well-penned. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to look at this poem. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
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Hello Earl,
You are so welcome. Take care.
Comment from Bichon
Aww, this was a very sweet five seven five. You captured your only personal emotions perfectly and expressed them well while speaking about this lovely bird.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Aww, this was a very sweet five seven five. You captured your only personal emotions perfectly and expressed them well while speaking about this lovely bird.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to look at this poem. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
