Sunrise
A Naani contest offering22 total reviews
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought you painted beautiful imagery of a sunrise in your piece. I thought this was really well written and I thought that your poem flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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I thought you painted beautiful imagery of a sunrise in your piece. I thought this was really well written and I thought that your poem flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review, Jacob!
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani poem, Sunrise, uses twenty-four syllables and reports the expected but none the less glorious return of the brilliant light of a new day.
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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This naani poem, Sunrise, uses twenty-four syllables and reports the expected but none the less glorious return of the brilliant light of a new day.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your review, Bill!
