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An End to Hate!

They were never your enemy, just waiting to be your friend!

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Comment from littlebit69
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I love it! Let the truth be told. One of Satan's traps is to divide us by keeping us apart. As long as we go in faith in loving one another, God will do the rest. Why? Because God is love. It is what it's all about. Satan knows nothing about LOVE!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are strong, have a message, and are creative. The reading of this poem for me is simply about God's love. "Love one another as I have loved you". Thank you for the author's notes.
Have a wonderful day! Thank you for a great message. Maria

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from roof35
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This is very inspiring and thought-provoking. It is rhymed nicely and I enjoyed reading it. Your picture pairs perfectly with your words. This is well written.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the hatred we have for other people is hard to forgive when they deliberately bring harm to you and your family, but that is only God's right to punish and judge people who do wrong to us.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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An End to Hate!
by Fonda Little

Hello, Fonda,

I like your poem about neighborly love. "Love each other as I have loved you". Well done my friend.

The font is hard to read.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from nomi338
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Amen and bless you brother. That all the people alive on the earth today are descendants of Noah, his sons and their wives, is inescapable fact. The changes or differences in our appearances are caused by the external conditions of where our ancestors settled after they were scattered by God from the Tower of Babel. While our physical appearance changed, our anatomy did not. That is why when someone from one so called race mates with someone from another so called race looks like a mixture of both, but is still a human in every way. Given man's depravity, if this were not so, there would be many animals walking about that resembled men and the animals they perfored perverted sex act with. Think on that.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by nomi338 on 02-Sep-2020
    Bless you.
Comment from joycetreasures
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Fonda,
Top of the day to you. I pray all is well with you doing this global pandemic. This is a beautiful poem of love and not hate. I can tell God was in this message that you shared. I wish people didn't judge or hate in our world today. Jesus paid a price for our sins. Like His father, He is love. You have so many beautiful words in your message. I love this one, "where that hatred begins, let it so end, so that your blinded eyes, can finally see." Satan is busy looking for ways to make us hate. We have to stay steadfast in our Faith. Well done, Fonda. This was an enjoyable read for me. Well-done. I love this scripture, 1 John 4:19-2. God bless you. Happy writing:-)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by joycetreasures on 02-Sep-2020
    You are welcome, Fonda.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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This is a well written poem that is truly inspired and conveys such a necessary message for today. I am so thankful to God that I was not raised by parents who spread messages of hate for anyone, but rather embraced all people of different religions and colors. I wish everyone had this kind of upbringing. Of course, you are right, Jesus died for us all - we have no right to assume that He loves us more than anyone else.
Good luck in the contest.
P.S. I read your author notes - congratulations on your year and a half of sobriety! I know it is the Grace of God that is present in your life.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
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This is a solid free verse. I can't suggest any improvements really. I think this could be fine the way it is. Thanks for sharing this with us. Keep up your writing.

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from RGstar
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I have not read your work before Fonda little, but beautiful to see your message of unity and togetherness which never is a subject lost to my heart. One thing...take all the end commas away, you can leave the ones in the middle of the stanzas or sentence...take the end commas away, they might confuse and serve no purpose, and it would read much more smooth. Love the commitment aligned with faith....the image and imagery speaks for itself. Well done.
My best wishes. Have a good day
RGstar

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!