Forsaken Lover's Rune
Sometimes, a little magic is called for...49 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvette,
This is a well written minute poem which seems to be about aging and fantasies about being young again. I like the colorful text and the artwork.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Yvette,
This is a well written minute poem which seems to be about aging and fantasies about being young again. I like the colorful text and the artwork.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Joan, and for stopping in today!! ;) Always good to hear from you, my lady - take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette.
Same to you.
Joan
Comment from w.j.debi
I feel transported away to a beautiful world where everything is just the way I imagine it, both physically and mentally. Joyous emotions and contentment abide here.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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I feel transported away to a beautiful world where everything is just the way I imagine it, both physically and mentally. Joyous emotions and contentment abide here.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, my lady, THANK YOU so much for these lovely stars and such an awesome review -- I am so appreciative of your support!! ;) I apologize for running behind, but it just seems that I'm pulled in many different directions these days! :) :) Take good care of you out there and pop in again soon!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, a well written Minute poem, true to form with good use of metaphor in 'Would that the talisman of dawn' - good line. As usual your display is so well done and I love the picture. Good message in your poem. Good Luck in the contest. Love Dorothy x
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Hello Yvette, a well written Minute poem, true to form with good use of metaphor in 'Would that the talisman of dawn' - good line. As usual your display is so well done and I love the picture. Good message in your poem. Good Luck in the contest. Love Dorothy x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Dorothy! Yvette
Comment from StrengthInNumbers
Hello!
Beautiful art work! Like, just really, absolutely stunning. I love how you match the font colours to the colours in the art.
Your words create beautiful imagery. This is a perfect poem for early summer. It is romantic and spiritual and full of mystery.
I imagine a woman sitting on a front porch, maybe in the country, watching the sun rise early on a summer morning, and feeling full of life and peace and joy, as she writes these words to match the moment.
I could be way off, but that is what I got out of reading this poem.
Great work!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Hello!
Beautiful art work! Like, just really, absolutely stunning. I love how you match the font colours to the colours in the art.
Your words create beautiful imagery. This is a perfect poem for early summer. It is romantic and spiritual and full of mystery.
I imagine a woman sitting on a front porch, maybe in the country, watching the sun rise early on a summer morning, and feeling full of life and peace and joy, as she writes these words to match the moment.
I could be way off, but that is what I got out of reading this poem.
Great work!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, my lady, THANK YOU so much for these lovely stars and such an awesome review!! ;) I apologize for running behind, but it just seems that I'm pulled in many different directions these days! :) :) Take good care of you out there and pop in again soon!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Just lovely! The way the whole thing appears is a work of art in itself. The gradations of coloring in the text, complimenting the impressionism of the art work. So beautiful. Love the idea of the relaxation of a stressed mind and desire for that peace to continue past dream time.
Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Just lovely! The way the whole thing appears is a work of art in itself. The gradations of coloring in the text, complimenting the impressionism of the art work. So beautiful. Love the idea of the relaxation of a stressed mind and desire for that peace to continue past dream time.
Well done!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Sorry I'm so far behind, Lucy - but know that this 'thanx' is no less sincere!! ;) So appreciate your support, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading this poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like how you structured it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I have enjoyed reading this poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like how you structured it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
Masterful word weaving on this, metaphoric heaven.
Beautiful lines soothing the mind and drawing pictures in reader's eye:
Soft incantations soothe the mind,
leaving behind
dreamscapes of flight
and heart's delight...
I wish you luck in the contest. With an offering like this you won't need it.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Masterful word weaving on this, metaphoric heaven.
Beautiful lines soothing the mind and drawing pictures in reader's eye:
Soft incantations soothe the mind,
leaving behind
dreamscapes of flight
and heart's delight...
I wish you luck in the contest. With an offering like this you won't need it.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanx much for your wonderful comments! ;) So good of you to stop by for a review - be sure to drop in again sometime! ;) Yvette
Comment from Alchera
"Would that the talisman of dawn
such bliss prolong,
and fantasy
set love's heart free..."
How much I wish I had the strength to be able to drive the fiery chariot of Apollo until dawn to remain in the arms of Aphrodite! Would this magic talisman of yours really work? Perfectly written within the minute rules contest structural format: syllables well counted 8/4/4/4 in all three stanzas, versification exactly rhymed, and beautifully described through its magical story lined content. Great work!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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"Would that the talisman of dawn
such bliss prolong,
and fantasy
set love's heart free..."
How much I wish I had the strength to be able to drive the fiery chariot of Apollo until dawn to remain in the arms of Aphrodite! Would this magic talisman of yours really work? Perfectly written within the minute rules contest structural format: syllables well counted 8/4/4/4 in all three stanzas, versification exactly rhymed, and beautifully described through its magical story lined content. Great work!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanx, Tony, always good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
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Blessings Yvette !
Comment from estory
I thought you did a great job with the rhythms of the lines to generate this spinning effect. Good example of form providing the framework for theme. I think your images of moonlight and stars slowly circling create this sense of magic and a mystical connection to nature. There's also a surreal, dream like fantasy feel to it. The possibilities within fantasy. estory
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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I thought you did a great job with the rhythms of the lines to generate this spinning effect. Good example of form providing the framework for theme. I think your images of moonlight and stars slowly circling create this sense of magic and a mystical connection to nature. There's also a surreal, dream like fantasy feel to it. The possibilities within fantasy. estory
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2020
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Thanx, E, always good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
This confirms it, you are from another realm. This was so magically sweet and hopeful. It left me starry-eyed. Beautifully penned and aptly illustrated, too. Dreamy! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This confirms it, you are from another realm. This was so magically sweet and hopeful. It left me starry-eyed. Beautifully penned and aptly illustrated, too. Dreamy! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 17-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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LOL! :) :) Thanx so much, Lady Sal, for your review on this one -- you always know how to make me feel good! ;) Take care out there and have a Wonderful Wednesday!! ;) Yvette
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I speak the truth! ;) :)
