Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is such cute flash fiction. I like that it was a dog you had a friend for life because I can't imagine kissing a stranger and having a life companion that quickly. LOL

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review Beth. I'm with you, a lifelong friendshipof two people would take a lot longer.

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Excellent

This is funny and delightful. It's missing some commas, though. I would have given it a 6 other than that. I love the twist. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from TommyWrites

Excellent

Ahh very good! Easy to read, enjoyable and fun! It is well written, and the words neatly placed.
I love the title 'Friend for life,' for the person you love should be your bestist of friends. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a cute story, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your contest entry. You did a great job with the prompt. I like that you saved the best for last. I believe you are describing the first meeting of you and your puppy (dog). I like how you formatted your lines and the bold type. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review
Jan. Nice to see someone saw what I was actually writing about.

Comment from Jacob David Collins

Excellent

I didn't expect the direction your story was going to go in, so I thought that was very clever and well done. I got into your writing really easily and I enjoyed reading your work. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review.
Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Well, I guess that was one humdinger of a kiss--tuckered the poor girl out! Nicely told story. But you might want to think up something more original than 'Her smile lit up the room . . .' Best to avoid such commonly used phrases.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review and suggestion. Much appreciated.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Nice story about the first kiss that started a love story in the blink of the eye.thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writing.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.