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Comment from January L'Angelle
Hey Ricky, Hope you are well. I like this poem. There are some lines in it that remind me of Madonna's "Like a Prayer" song. You should listen to it. Your poem is unique to you and it's about wishing. I think that's awesome! I like your style and how the words flow so easily. I can see that a lot of thought went into this poem. It's powerfully written. -January L.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hey Ricky, Hope you are well. I like this poem. There are some lines in it that remind me of Madonna's "Like a Prayer" song. You should listen to it. Your poem is unique to you and it's about wishing. I think that's awesome! I like your style and how the words flow so easily. I can see that a lot of thought went into this poem. It's powerfully written. -January L.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thanks January I always look forward to seeing you reviewing my work.
Ricky
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Author, Your colorful starfish sets the pace for your writing. Your choice of format was a perfect style for easy reading. Thank you for sharing your little starfish story and then you added the part where you linked the stars in the sky with the stars in the sea. Very creative
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Author, Your colorful starfish sets the pace for your writing. Your choice of format was a perfect style for easy reading. Thank you for sharing your little starfish story and then you added the part where you linked the stars in the sky with the stars in the sea. Very creative
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thanks again Mary I really appreciate your beautiful review.
Doctor Ricky 1024