Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Author the bright red color certainly depicts a really heated moment and the picture reflects the same and then your words just executes a distinct wild kiss. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read and the bright picture chosen

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020

Thanks so much for your read and comments. Very few people pick up on the color scheme. Much appreciated.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

It's fascinating story of your first kiss to precious soulmate bliss; she came at the pre-engaged place, you took her in your arms and gave her a heart-felt kiss; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. Wish good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2020

Thanks for your read and review; glad you enjoyed the piece.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

It does sound as if two of-workers enjoyed a rendezvous near a lake. But is this an illicit affair? I'd like to think it's not, but that word "wanton" in stanza three gets in the way of my thoroughly enjoying their experience.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020

Ok. I will make a change. I had mixed feelings about it. Appreciate your input. Changed to:
Enchanted by her charms
I took her in my arms
Kissed a heart-felt kiss
Precious soulmate bliss

reply by RodG on 12-Jun-2020

Yes, indeed he was enchanted by this lovely creature. But may I make another suggestion?
I took her in mt arms,
GAVE HER a heart-felt kiss
Precious soulmate bliss